From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Sat Nov 29 02:06:50 2008 Return-Path: Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:4f8:fff6::34]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id DBC811065673 for ; Sat, 29 Nov 2008 02:06:50 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from gabor@FreeBSD.org) Received: from server.mypc.hu (server.mypc.hu [87.229.73.95]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 8DB698FC0A for ; Sat, 29 Nov 2008 02:06:50 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from gabor@FreeBSD.org) Received: from localhost (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by server.mypc.hu (Postfix) with ESMTP id B66DF14D7E1F; Sat, 29 Nov 2008 02:56:05 +0100 (CET) X-Virus-Scanned: amavisd-new at t-hosting.hu Received: from server.mypc.hu ([127.0.0.1]) by localhost (server.mypc.hu [127.0.0.1]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with LMTP id 1Uql1EAR05kU; Sat, 29 Nov 2008 02:56:02 +0100 (CET) Received: from [192.168.1.105] (catv-80-98-156-89.catv.broadband.hu [80.98.156.89]) (using TLSv1 with cipher DHE-RSA-AES256-SHA (256/256 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by server.mypc.hu (Postfix) with ESMTPSA id E077614D7E1C; Sat, 29 Nov 2008 02:56:02 +0100 (CET) Message-ID: <4930A131.60108@FreeBSD.org> Date: Sat, 29 Nov 2008 02:56:01 +0100 From: =?ISO-8859-1?Q?G=E1bor_K=F6vesd=E1n?= User-Agent: Thunderbird 2.0.0.18 (Windows/20081105) MIME-Version: 1.0 To: Gabor PALI References: <49309E91.7050006@FreeBSD.org> In-Reply-To: <49309E91.7050006@FreeBSD.org> Content-Type: text/plain; charset=ISO-8859-1; format=flowed Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit Cc: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Subject: Re: RFR: A Pack of Patches for Chapter "SGML Markup" in FDP Primer X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Sat, 29 Nov 2008 02:06:50 -0000 Wow! The new pgj patchbombs are arriving. :) > > http://people.freebsd.org/~pgj/patches/2008/11/29/doc.en.books.fdp-primer.sgml-markup.patch/2.diff > > Oh, yeah. Ports Collection should be capitalized. > We could even put   between them. It is a proper name, it would look strange separated. > > http://people.freebsd.org/~pgj/patches/2008/11/29/doc.en.books.fdp-primer.sgml-markup.patch/3.diff > > I think word "of" should be "or" because we are talking about "rowspan > and/or colspan attributes", so it would rhyme with "number of rows or > columns" or "number of rows and/or columns". > I think you are right here. And I agree with the other ones, as well, I think they are all reasonable suggestions. Best, -- Gabor Kovesdan EMAIL: gabor@FreeBSD.org WWW: http://www.kovesdan.org