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Jim Mock wrote:
> 
> Hi folks,
> 
> I got a bunch of feedback from my last post about the New User's
> Handbook, I took some (well, most) of your suggestions and have just
> build the newest version of it.  The source is available at
> http://soupnazi.org/~jim/FreeBSD/newuser.tgz, and the HTML output is
> available at http://soupnazi.org/~jim/FreeBSD/newuser-handbook/.
> 
> I have the UNIX Basics stuff in <![ IGNORE [...]]> tags for now so
> it's not built.  If it's decided that it should be kept out of this
> book and put into it's own, I'll remove the entire chunk before I commit
> it.
> 
> Comments?

The first line of chapter 3 refers to the goals section, which has been
moved to chapter 1.

The links in chapter 5 to the handbook and faq don't work on my system. 
Perhaps I installed things wrong, but they are in
/usr/share/doc/en/books, not /usr/share/doc; and `faq' is in lower case.

In chapter 6, do you want to include these links:

http://www.oreillynet.com/bsd/
http://www.bsdtoday.com/
?


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