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From: Murray Stokely <murray@FreeBSD.org>
Date: Sun, 3 Aug 2003 14:45:29 -0700 (PDT)
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Subject: cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/multimedia
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murray      2003/08/03 14:45:29 PDT

  FreeBSD doc repository

  Modified files:
    en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/multimedia chapter.sgml 
  Log:
  * Multiple grammar fixes.
  * Reword first person sentences.
  * Add missing words.
  * Remove duplicate words.
  * "Do this.." -> "type this .."
  
  The video section of this chapter still needs a LOT of work.
  
  Sponsored by:     FreeBSD Mall, Inc.
  
  Revision  Changes    Path
  1.53      +23 -29    doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/multimedia/chapter.sgml