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Date:      Fri, 22 Jun 2012 06:56:50 +0000 (UTC)
From:      Eitan Adler <eadler@FreeBSD.org>
To:        doc-committers@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, svn-doc-head@freebsd.org
Subject:   svn commit: r39093 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/portmgr
Message-ID:  <201206220656.q5M6uoS3062293@svn.freebsd.org>

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Author: eadler (src,ports committer)
Date: Fri Jun 22 06:56:50 2012
New Revision: 39093
URL: http://svn.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/39093

Log:
  - Move away from CVS specific use cases
  - Don't specify an acronym when the text is only used once in the
    document
  
  Approved by:	bcr
  Approved by:	portmgr (bapt)

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/portmgr/policies.sgml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/portmgr/policies.sgml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/portmgr/policies.sgml	Thu Jun 21 22:57:58 2012	(r39092)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/portmgr/policies.sgml	Fri Jun 22 06:56:50 2012	(r39093)
@@ -42,7 +42,7 @@
 	is divided up)</p></li>
 </ul>
 
-<p>Again, since the ports CVS tree is not branched, any large-scale
+<p>Again, since the ports tree is not branched, any large-scale
   failures that might be caused by any of the above need to be caught
   first before a large number of user installations are affected.</p>
 
@@ -52,8 +52,8 @@
 
 <p>portmgr reserves the right to act as final arbiter of other
   commits in certain unusual cases, such as: commits that in their
-  opinion destabilize the Ports Collection; violate POLA (the
-  Principle Of Least Astonishment) for FreeBSD's users; or in cases
+  opinion destabilize the Ports Collection; violate the
+  Principle Of Least Astonishment for FreeBSD's users; or in cases
   of inter-committer disputes that can not be solved among the
   committers themselves.</p>
 
@@ -138,12 +138,12 @@
   Committer's Guide.  In case of disputes, it reserves the right
   to abitrate, subject to review by the Core Team.</p>
 
-<h3>Manage CVS Commit Access To The Ports Tree</h3>
+<h3>Manage Commit Access To The Ports Tree</h3>
 
 <p>The FreeBSD Core Team has delegated the responsibility to manage
-  CVS commit access to the <tt>ports/</tt> tree to portmgr.  Core
+  commit access to the <tt>ports/</tt> tree to portmgr.  Core
   reviews granting and revocation of commit bits and has final
-  authority over the entire FreeBSD CVS repository.</p>
+  authority over all the entire FreeBSD repositories.</p>
 
 <p>New Ports Committers are proposed by an existing Ports Committer
   who wishes to act as a mentor.  The proposals should include a brief



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