From owner-svn-doc-head@freebsd.org Sat Dec 23 05:40:37 2017 Return-Path: Delivered-To: svn-doc-head@mailman.ysv.freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:1900:2254:206a::19:1]) by mailman.ysv.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id EF42FE9A48C; Sat, 23 Dec 2017 05:40:37 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from kaduk@mit.edu) Received: from dmz-mailsec-scanner-4.mit.edu (dmz-mailsec-scanner-4.mit.edu [18.9.25.15]) (using TLSv1.2 with cipher ECDHE-RSA-AES256-GCM-SHA384 (256/256 bits)) (Client did not present a certificate) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 6745976CBB; Sat, 23 Dec 2017 05:40:36 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from kaduk@mit.edu) X-AuditID: 1209190f-127ff70000006c5b-3d-5a3deb1ef010 Received: from mailhub-auth-2.mit.edu ( [18.7.62.36]) (using TLS with cipher DHE-RSA-AES256-SHA (256/256 bits)) (Client did not present a certificate) by dmz-mailsec-scanner-4.mit.edu (Symantec Messaging Gateway) with SMTP id 90.01.27739.F1BED3A5; Sat, 23 Dec 2017 00:35:27 -0500 (EST) Received: from outgoing.mit.edu (OUTGOING-AUTH-1.MIT.EDU [18.9.28.11]) by mailhub-auth-2.mit.edu (8.13.8/8.9.2) with ESMTP id vBN5ZMoq007713; Sat, 23 Dec 2017 00:35:23 -0500 Received: from kduck.kaduk.org (24-107-191-124.dhcp.stls.mo.charter.com [24.107.191.124]) (authenticated bits=56) (User authenticated as kaduk@ATHENA.MIT.EDU) by outgoing.mit.edu (8.13.8/8.12.4) with ESMTP id vBN5ZIRm001433 (version=TLSv1/SSLv3 cipher=DHE-RSA-AES256-SHA bits=256 verify=NOT); Sat, 23 Dec 2017 00:35:20 -0500 Date: Fri, 22 Dec 2017 23:35:18 -0600 From: Benjamin Kaduk To: Eitan Adler Cc: doc-committers@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, svn-doc-head@freebsd.org Subject: Re: svn commit: r51330 - in head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs: ipv6 multimedia portmgr Message-ID: <20171223053518.GW39477@kduck.kaduk.org> References: <201712221748.vBMHmiUt059300@repo.freebsd.org> <20171223042430.GV39477@kduck.kaduk.org> MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii Content-Disposition: inline In-Reply-To: User-Agent: Mutt/1.9.1 (2017-09-22) X-Brightmail-Tracker: H4sIAAAAAAAAA+NgFvrDIsWRmVeSWpSXmKPExsUixG6noiv/2jbKYNpFcYsfHw8xWez6O4fZ 4sai/UwWu/t7mR1YPGZ8ms8SwBjFZZOSmpNZllqkb5fAlTHr9FbWgse8FYevtrA1MO7g6mLk 5JAQMJH4ue81WxcjF4eQwGImiYtntrFCOBsZJRa/vMkEUiUkcJVJ4u2ZLBCbRUBV4tmM5WBx NgEViYbuy8wgtgiQ/X3/T7A4s0CUxOyvr9lBbGGBaImLbU/BbF6gbd//XGSEWLCGUeLFmS1Q CUGJkzOfsEA0a0nc+PcSaBAHkC0tsfwfB0iYUyBQ4te1M2wgtqiAssTevkPsExgFZiHpnoWk exZC9wJG5lWMsim5Vbq5iZk5xanJusXJiXl5qUW6Jnq5mSV6qSmlmxhBAcspyb+DcU6D9yFG AQ5GJR5eDwXbKCHWxLLiytxDjJIcTEqivFotNlFCfEn5KZUZicUZ8UWlOanFhxglOJiVRHh3 lwGV86YkVlalFuXDpKQ5WJTEed1NtKOEBNITS1KzU1MLUotgsjIcHEoSvAyvgBoFi1LTUyvS MnNKENJMHJwgw3mAhuuC1PAWFyTmFmemQ+RPMepyPJv5uoFZiCUvPy9VSpy39iVQkQBIUUZp HtwcUKKRyN5f84pRHOgtYd53IFU8wCQFN+kV0BImoCXTg6xBlpQkIqSkGhh7raQ+zX+0YEX2 uQ2r/1sbq1d8/bb+98kNRrPU/ukuMTvq2tY+49i2K7tVgmrnfo/xiOg48UDOcauBXNy+MuuF 3Oq+l3bWPsz0YdTfzWTAwxP17OP5mSd3Xsy1nDXpZ/9zxhDjHr1LszzW1pVwfDGVjzN3z4gR Php0qac112uDCENPZSdr6iMlluKMREMt5qLiRAA/l+/uDwMAAA== X-BeenThere: svn-doc-head@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.25 Precedence: list List-Id: SVN commit messages for the doc tree for head List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Sat, 23 Dec 2017 05:40:38 -0000 On Fri, Dec 22, 2017 at 08:43:22PM -0800, Eitan Adler wrote: > On 22 December 2017 at 20:24, Benjamin Kaduk wrote: > > On Fri, Dec 22, 2017 at 05:48:44PM +0000, Eitan Adler wrote: > >> Author: eadler > >> Date: Fri Dec 22 17:48:44 2017 > >> New Revision: 51330 > >> URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/51330 > >> > >> Log: > >> multiple: fix a few typos > >> > >> - Duplicate words > >> - change -> chance > >> - insure -> ensure (this is actually an Americanism, but can confuse > >> some people) > >> > >> Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/multimedia/multimedia-input.xml > >> ============================================================================== > >> --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/multimedia/multimedia-input.xml Fri Dec 22 14:48:00 2017 (r51329) > >> +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/multimedia/multimedia-input.xml Fri Dec 22 17:48:44 2017 (r51330) > >> @@ -13072,7 +13072,7 @@ > >> on the system. One of the first problems presented > >> to the person who wants to tune the scheduler is > >> how to measure the effects of their changes. Simply > >> - tweaking the parameters and hoping that that will > >> + tweaking the parameters and hoping that will > > > > This "that that" was correct. I am travelling; can you fix it? > > I read this a few times. Switched to > - tweaking the parameters and hoping that will > + tweaking the parameters and hoping that the tweaks will That looks good; thanks. > > A fun sentence for you: Tim where Jim had had "had had" had had "had"; > "had had" had had a better effect on the teacher. (Is it really "Tim", or "Time"?) -Ben