Date: Tue, 9 Jul 2019 23:59:30 +0000 (UTC) From: John Baldwin <jhb@FreeBSD.org> To: doc-committers@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, svn-doc-head@freebsd.org Subject: svn commit: r53242 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/freebsd-releng Message-ID: <201907092359.x69NxUvl061252@repo.freebsd.org>
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Author: jhb Date: Tue Jul 9 23:59:30 2019 New Revision: 53242 URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/53242 Log: A few more wording tweaks to the section on ENs. - Use "revisions from the stable/ branch" instead of "revisions against the stable/ branch". - Use "the <foo> team". Reviewed by: gjb Differential Revision: https://reviews.freebsd.org/D20902 Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/freebsd-releng/article.xml Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/freebsd-releng/article.xml ============================================================================== --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/freebsd-releng/article.xml Tue Jul 9 20:26:04 2019 (r53241) +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/freebsd-releng/article.xml Tue Jul 9 23:59:30 2019 (r53242) @@ -473,15 +473,15 @@ <para>The completed Errata Notice template should be emailed together with either a patch against the &branch.releng; - branch or a list of revisions against the &branch.stable; + branch or a list of revisions from the &branch.stable; branch.</para> <para>For Errata Notice requests immediately following the - release, the request should be emailed to both &team.re; and - &team.secteam;. Once the &branch.releng; branch has been - handed over to &team.secteam; as described in <xref + release, the request should be emailed to both the &team.re; and + the &team.secteam;. Once the &branch.releng; branch has been + handed over to the &team.secteam; as described in <xref linkend="releng-wrapup-handoff"/>, Errata Notice requests - should be sent to &team.secteam;.</para> + should be sent to the &team.secteam;.</para> </sect2> <sect2 xml:id="releng-wrapup-handoff">
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