From owner-svn-doc-all@freebsd.org Tue Jul 9 23:59:31 2019 Return-Path: Delivered-To: svn-doc-all@mailman.ysv.freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2610:1c1:1:606c::19:1]) by mailman.ysv.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 2905715E9410; Tue, 9 Jul 2019 23:59:31 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from jhb@FreeBSD.org) Received: from mxrelay.nyi.freebsd.org (mxrelay.nyi.freebsd.org [IPv6:2610:1c1:1:606c::19:3]) (using TLSv1.3 with cipher TLS_AES_256_GCM_SHA384 (256/256 bits) server-signature RSA-PSS (4096 bits) client-signature RSA-PSS (4096 bits) client-digest SHA256) (Client CN "mxrelay.nyi.freebsd.org", Issuer "Let's Encrypt Authority X3" (verified OK)) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTPS id C06B48D0C5; Tue, 9 Jul 2019 23:59:30 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from jhb@FreeBSD.org) Received: from repo.freebsd.org (repo.freebsd.org [IPv6:2610:1c1:1:6068::e6a:0]) (using TLSv1.2 with cipher ECDHE-RSA-AES256-GCM-SHA384 (256/256 bits)) (Client did not present a certificate) by mxrelay.nyi.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 993D5715A; Tue, 9 Jul 2019 23:59:30 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from jhb@FreeBSD.org) Received: from repo.freebsd.org ([127.0.1.37]) by repo.freebsd.org (8.15.2/8.15.2) with ESMTP id x69NxUXK061253; Tue, 9 Jul 2019 23:59:30 GMT (envelope-from jhb@FreeBSD.org) Received: (from jhb@localhost) by repo.freebsd.org (8.15.2/8.15.2/Submit) id x69NxUvl061252; Tue, 9 Jul 2019 23:59:30 GMT (envelope-from jhb@FreeBSD.org) Message-Id: <201907092359.x69NxUvl061252@repo.freebsd.org> X-Authentication-Warning: repo.freebsd.org: jhb set sender to jhb@FreeBSD.org using -f From: John Baldwin Date: Tue, 9 Jul 2019 23:59:30 +0000 (UTC) To: doc-committers@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, svn-doc-head@freebsd.org Subject: svn commit: r53242 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/freebsd-releng X-SVN-Group: doc-head X-SVN-Commit-Author: jhb X-SVN-Commit-Paths: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/freebsd-releng X-SVN-Commit-Revision: 53242 X-SVN-Commit-Repository: doc MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit X-Rspamd-Queue-Id: C06B48D0C5 X-Spamd-Bar: -- Authentication-Results: mx1.freebsd.org X-Spamd-Result: default: False [-2.94 / 15.00]; local_wl_from(0.00)[FreeBSD.org]; NEURAL_HAM_MEDIUM(-1.00)[-0.999,0]; NEURAL_HAM_LONG(-1.00)[-1.000,0]; NEURAL_HAM_SHORT(-0.94)[-0.941,0]; ASN(0.00)[asn:11403, ipnet:2610:1c1:1::/48, country:US] X-BeenThere: svn-doc-all@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.29 Precedence: list List-Id: "SVN commit messages for the entire doc trees \(except for " user" , " projects" , and " translations" \)" List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Tue, 09 Jul 2019 23:59:31 -0000 Author: jhb Date: Tue Jul 9 23:59:30 2019 New Revision: 53242 URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/53242 Log: A few more wording tweaks to the section on ENs. - Use "revisions from the stable/ branch" instead of "revisions against the stable/ branch". - Use "the team". Reviewed by: gjb Differential Revision: https://reviews.freebsd.org/D20902 Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/freebsd-releng/article.xml Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/freebsd-releng/article.xml ============================================================================== --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/freebsd-releng/article.xml Tue Jul 9 20:26:04 2019 (r53241) +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/freebsd-releng/article.xml Tue Jul 9 23:59:30 2019 (r53242) @@ -473,15 +473,15 @@ The completed Errata Notice template should be emailed together with either a patch against the &branch.releng; - branch or a list of revisions against the &branch.stable; + branch or a list of revisions from the &branch.stable; branch. For Errata Notice requests immediately following the - release, the request should be emailed to both &team.re; and - &team.secteam;. Once the &branch.releng; branch has been - handed over to &team.secteam; as described in , Errata Notice requests - should be sent to &team.secteam;. + should be sent to the &team.secteam;.