From owner-svn-doc-projects@FreeBSD.ORG Tue May 21 17:31:53 2013 Return-Path: Delivered-To: svn-doc-projects@FreeBSD.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:1900:2254:206a::19:1]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id E44CC364; Tue, 21 May 2013 17:31:53 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from trhodes@FreeBSD.org) Received: from hapkido.dreamhost.com (hapkido.dreamhost.com [66.33.216.122]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id CCF6BAE; Tue, 21 May 2013 17:31:53 +0000 (UTC) Received: from homiemail-a29.g.dreamhost.com (caiajhbdcahe.dreamhost.com [208.97.132.74]) by hapkido.dreamhost.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 29D4F15F4; Tue, 21 May 2013 10:31:47 -0700 (PDT) Received: from homiemail-a29.g.dreamhost.com (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by homiemail-a29.g.dreamhost.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 5703167407B; Tue, 21 May 2013 10:31:41 -0700 (PDT) Received: from lab (ip72-219-240-45.dc.dc.cox.net [72.219.240.45]) (Authenticated sender: trhodes@fbsdsecure.org) by homiemail-a29.g.dreamhost.com (Postfix) with ESMTPA id 78995674095; Tue, 21 May 2013 10:31:40 -0700 (PDT) Date: Tue, 21 May 2013 13:31:39 -0400 From: Tom Rhodes To: bcr@FreeBSD.org Subject: Re: svn commit: r41667 - in projects/ISBN_1-57176-407-0/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook: basics users Message-Id: <20130521133139.1b576acc.trhodes@FreeBSD.org> In-Reply-To: <519B8626.30405@FreeBSD.org> References: <201305190001.r4J01wQe092105@svn.freebsd.org> <519B8626.30405@FreeBSD.org> X-Mailer: Sylpheed version 1.0.6 (GTK+ 1.2.10; x86_64-unknown-linux-gnu) Mime-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=US-ASCII Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit Cc: wblock@wonkity.com, svn-doc-projects@FreeBSD.org, doc-committers@FreeBSD.org X-BeenThere: svn-doc-projects@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.14 Precedence: list List-Id: SVN commit messages for doc projects trees List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Tue, 21 May 2013 17:31:54 -0000 On Tue, 21 May 2013 16:35:18 +0200 Benedict Reuschling wrote: > -----BEGIN PGP SIGNED MESSAGE----- > Hash: SHA1 > > Am 21.05.13 16:32, schrieb Warren Block: > > On Sun, 19 May 2013, Tom Rhodes wrote: > > > >> Author: trhodes Date: Sun May 19 00:01:57 2013 New Revision: > >> 41667 URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/41667 > >> > >> Log: Add more information on binary formats in basics. Add a > >> note about sudo in the users chapter. Add a section on using root > >> in the users chapter. > >> > >> Modified: > >> projects/ISBN_1-57176-407-0/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/basics/chapter.xml > >> > >> > >> > >> > projects/ISBN_1-57176-407-0/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/users/chapter.xml > >> > >> > >> Modified: > >> projects/ISBN_1-57176-407-0/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/basics/chapter.xml > >> > >> > >> > >> > ============================================================================== > >> > >> --- > >> projects/ISBN_1-57176-407-0/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/basics/chapter.xml > >> > >> > Sat May 18 23:44:23 2013 (r41666) +++ > >> projects/ISBN_1-57176-407-0/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/basics/chapter.xml > >> > >> > Sun May 19 00:01:57 2013 (r41667) @@ -302,6 +302,15 @@ > >> console none managing requests for hardware devices, > >> peripherals, memory, and CPU time fairly to each user. > >> > >> + Much more information about User Accounts is in the > >> chapter > > > > It seems odd to capitalize "user accounts" there. > > > >> + about accounts. For now you > >> just + need to know that each person (user) who uses the > >> computer should be + given their own username and password. > >> The system keeps track + of the people using the computer > >> based on this username. Since + it is often the case that > >> several people are working on the same + project Unix also > >> provides groups. Several users can be placed > > > > Needs a comma after "project". > > > > Did not look at the rest, maybe later. > > Also, the use of "you" is discouraged in the handbook. Did I miss one? I swear I cleaned that entire patch up (re-wrote ~91% of it). Some things I removed were "you," missing markup, long lines, whitespace nits, bad wording, etc. Thanks, fixed locally!