From owner-svn-doc-all@freebsd.org Fri Oct 7 18:00:24 2016 Return-Path: Delivered-To: svn-doc-all@mailman.ysv.freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:1900:2254:206a::19:1]) by mailman.ysv.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 89CAEC04A20; Fri, 7 Oct 2016 18:00:24 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from sevan@FreeBSD.org) Received: from repo.freebsd.org (repo.freebsd.org [IPv6:2610:1c1:1:6068::e6a:0]) (using TLSv1.2 with cipher ECDHE-RSA-AES256-GCM-SHA384 (256/256 bits)) (Client did not present a certificate) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 66C85942; Fri, 7 Oct 2016 18:00:24 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from sevan@FreeBSD.org) Received: from repo.freebsd.org ([127.0.1.37]) by repo.freebsd.org (8.15.2/8.15.2) with ESMTP id u97I0NdS043701; Fri, 7 Oct 2016 18:00:23 GMT (envelope-from sevan@FreeBSD.org) Received: (from sevan@localhost) by repo.freebsd.org (8.15.2/8.15.2/Submit) id u97I0NBR043700; Fri, 7 Oct 2016 18:00:23 GMT (envelope-from sevan@FreeBSD.org) Message-Id: <201610071800.u97I0NBR043700@repo.freebsd.org> X-Authentication-Warning: repo.freebsd.org: sevan set sender to sevan@FreeBSD.org using -f From: Sevan Janiyan Date: Fri, 7 Oct 2016 18:00:23 +0000 (UTC) To: doc-committers@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, svn-doc-head@freebsd.org Subject: svn commit: r49465 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/network-servers X-SVN-Group: doc-head MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit X-BeenThere: svn-doc-all@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.23 Precedence: list List-Id: "SVN commit messages for the entire doc trees \(except for " user" , " projects" , and " translations" \)" List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Fri, 07 Oct 2016 18:00:24 -0000 Author: sevan Date: Fri Oct 7 18:00:23 2016 New Revision: 49465 URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/49465 Log: Fix dead link to Apple's whitepaper on their AutoFS implementation using Archive.org mirror. Reword sentence leading up to link with a friendlier toned version. Replace contractions & spelling mistake raised by Igor. PR: 213022 Reported by: Ranjit Marathay Approved by: bcr (mentor) wblock Differential Revision: https://reviews.freebsd.org/D8156 Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/network-servers/chapter.xml Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/network-servers/chapter.xml ============================================================================== --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/network-servers/chapter.xml Fri Oct 7 16:21:35 2016 (r49464) +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/network-servers/chapter.xml Fri Oct 7 18:00:23 2016 (r49465) @@ -999,9 +999,9 @@ Exports list on foobar: &prompt.root; service autounmountd start The &man.autofs.5; map format is the same as in other - operating systems, it might be desirable to consult - information from other operating systems, such as the Mac + operating systems. Information about this format from other + sources can be useful, like the Mac OS X document. Consult the &man.automount.8;, &man.automountd.8;, @@ -3369,7 +3369,7 @@ options { disable-empty-zone "0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.IP6.ARPA"; disable-empty-zone "1.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.IP6.ARPA"; -// If you've got a DNS server around at your upstream provider, enter +// If you have a DNS server around at your upstream provider, enter // its IP address here, and enable the line below. This will make you // benefit from its cache, thus reduce overall DNS traffic in the Internet. /* @@ -3425,7 +3425,7 @@ options { // query-source address * port NNNNN; }; -// If you enable a local name server, don't forget to enter 127.0.0.1 +// If you enable a local name server, do not forget to enter 127.0.0.1 // first in your /etc/resolv.conf so this server will be queried. // Also, make sure to enable it in /etc/rc.conf. @@ -3621,7 +3621,7 @@ zone "ip6.int" { type master; file "/et // understand how DNS and BIND work. There are sometimes // non-obvious pitfalls. Setting up a slave zone is usually simpler. // -// NB: Don't blindly enable the examples below. :-) Use actual names +// NB: Do not blindly enable the examples below. :-) Use actual names // and addresses instead. /* An example dynamic zone @@ -4763,7 +4763,7 @@ $include Kexample.com.+005+nnnnn.ZSK.key LoadModule php5_module libexec/apache24/libphp5.so