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From: Murray Stokely <murray@FreeBSD.org>
Date: Fri, 20 Jul 2001 15:19:11 -0700 (PDT)
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Subject: cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/config chapter.sgml
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murray      2001/07/20 15:19:11 PDT

  Modified files:
    en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/config chapter.sgml 
  Log:
  * Move attribution information into <chapterinfo>
  
  * Remove myself from list of chapter authors, since I didn't really add
    very much.
  
  * Add more <filename> and <varname> tags
  
  * Use <varname> instead of <literal> around sysctl names
  
  * Reword references to look better without the benefit of a hyperlink
    - <para>Please see &man.ata.4;.</para>
    + <para>For more information, please see &man.ata.4;.</para>
  
  * Use 'SoftUpdates' consistently.
  
  * Saying that an "error message shows up in dmesg" is a bit cryptic for
    new users, so explain that messages get sent to a system buffer that
    is viewed with the dmesg command.
  
  Revision  Changes    Path
  1.9       +75 -46    doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/config/chapter.sgml


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