From owner-svn-doc-projects@FreeBSD.ORG Tue Jul 30 01:44:22 2013 Return-Path: Delivered-To: svn-doc-projects@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:1900:2254:206a::19:1]) (using TLSv1 with cipher ADH-AES256-SHA (256/256 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 86C2ED44; Tue, 30 Jul 2013 01:44:22 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from kaduk@mit.edu) Received: from dmz-mailsec-scanner-7.mit.edu (dmz-mailsec-scanner-7.mit.edu [18.7.68.36]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 04A3D2BBC; Tue, 30 Jul 2013 01:44:21 +0000 (UTC) X-AuditID: 12074424-b7f228e00000096b-7f-51f71a6fbac8 Received: from mailhub-auth-1.mit.edu ( [18.9.21.35]) by dmz-mailsec-scanner-7.mit.edu (Symantec Messaging Gateway) with SMTP id CB.5E.02411.F6A17F15; Mon, 29 Jul 2013 21:44:15 -0400 (EDT) Received: from outgoing.mit.edu (outgoing-auth-1.mit.edu [18.9.28.11]) by mailhub-auth-1.mit.edu (8.13.8/8.9.2) with ESMTP id r6U1iElH020740; Mon, 29 Jul 2013 21:44:14 -0400 Received: from multics.mit.edu (system-low-sipb.mit.edu [18.187.2.37]) (authenticated bits=56) (User authenticated as kaduk@ATHENA.MIT.EDU) by outgoing.mit.edu (8.13.8/8.12.4) with ESMTP id r6U1iBTh030878 (version=TLSv1/SSLv3 cipher=DHE-RSA-AES256-SHA bits=256 verify=NOT); Mon, 29 Jul 2013 21:44:13 -0400 Received: (from kaduk@localhost) by multics.mit.edu (8.12.9.20060308) id r6U1iBnD011901; Mon, 29 Jul 2013 21:44:11 -0400 (EDT) Date: Mon, 29 Jul 2013 21:44:11 -0400 (EDT) From: Benjamin Kaduk To: Warren Block Subject: Re: svn commit: r42473 - projects/zfsupdate-201307/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/filesystems In-Reply-To: <201307292228.r6TMSLA6059176@svn.freebsd.org> Message-ID: References: <201307292228.r6TMSLA6059176@svn.freebsd.org> User-Agent: Alpine 1.10 (GSO 962 2008-03-14) MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: TEXT/PLAIN; format=flowed; charset=US-ASCII X-Brightmail-Tracker: H4sIAAAAAAAAA+NgFnrDIsWRmVeSWpSXmKPExsUixCmqrJsv9T3QYOVKTosfHw8xWSw8s5rZ 4vL7iSwOzB4zPs1nCWCM4rJJSc3JLEst0rdL4Mpo2BhZcEawYufy90wNjBP4uhg5OCQETCR+ LoruYuQEMsUkLtxbz9bFyMUhJLCPUeLh7iXMEM5GRoktKxcxQjiHmCQ2PFrEBOE0MEocu/aD EaSfRUBb4mPbOSYQm01ARWLmm41sILaIgKrE9+5VYHFmARuJCQ8WsIPYwgIZEgvX7ACLcwpY SUw88ABsDq+Ao8SspfvBbCEBS4lv93+BzREV0JFYvX8KC0SNoMTJmU9YIGZaSvxb+4t1AqPg LCSpWUhSCxiZVjHKpuRW6eYmZuYUpybrFicn5uWlFuma6+VmluilppRuYgQFKruLyg7G5kNK hxgFOBiVeHg5ir8FCrEmlhVX5h5ilORgUhLlDRH+HijEl5SfUpmRWJwRX1Sak1p8iFGCg1lJ hJflBlA5b0piZVVqUT5MSpqDRUmc99nTs4FCAumJJanZqakFqUUwWRkODiUJ3qMSQEMFi1LT UyvSMnNKENJMHJwgw3mAhnNLAtXwFhck5hZnpkPkTzEqSonz/gRpFgBJZJTmwfXCEskrRnGg V4R5GUHaeYBJCK77FdBgJqDBu1VAri4uSURISTUwLpod8JFrcX3ywj2Xz9s/WR/ux6zyL4KT M4ZrSdW/WofbrdOXlO46sadwlce9Bwk7ZlhVftjjwfx0Vsa+XwGO+j2nzZidre/NyDorZcHa 0H5E/bqPX1tghOzxPO0V/O7WFzWnfa25+inxTqvDSk1FjZ4jPYdksph7lzS9VGhS/cd/TPj8 A7E7SizFGYmGWsxFxYkA4Hb/av8CAAA= Cc: svn-doc-projects@freebsd.org, doc-committers@freebsd.org X-BeenThere: svn-doc-projects@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.14 Precedence: list List-Id: SVN commit messages for doc projects trees List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Tue, 30 Jul 2013 01:44:22 -0000 On Mon, 29 Jul 2013, Warren Block wrote: > Author: wblock > Date: Mon Jul 29 22:28:20 2013 > New Revision: 42473 > URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/42473 > > Log: > Update the ZFS section with Allan Jude's latest diff. > > Modified: projects/zfsupdate-201307/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/filesystems/chapter.xml > ============================================================================== > --- projects/zfsupdate-201307/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/filesystems/chapter.xml Mon Jul 29 21:34:24 2013 (r42472) > +++ projects/zfsupdate-201307/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/filesystems/chapter.xml Mon Jul 29 22:28:20 2013 (r42473) > @@ -402,26 +395,44 @@ [...] > ZFS can also create volumes, which are block devices. > Volumes have many of the same features, including > copy-on-write, snapshots, clones and > - checksumming. > + checksumming. Volumes can be useful for running other > + file system formats on top of ZFS, such as UFS or in > + the case of Virtualization or exporting > + iSCSI extents. I'm not entirely sure what's supposed to be going on in this sentence. Is "such as UFS or in the case of Virtualization or exporting iSCSI extents" just supposed to be a list, but commas omitted because the scope is already inside a comma-separated list? (Also, I don't see a need for "Virtualization" to be capitalized.) The outer list could use semicolons to make the different scopes clearer, but perhaps a rewrite is better. > > @@ -710,10 +720,15 @@ > > > > - - id="filesystems-zfs-term-resilver"/>Resilver > + + id="filesystems-zfs-term-resilver">Resilver > > - > + When a disk fails and must be replaced, the new > + disk must be filled with the data that was lost. This > + process of calculating and writing the missing data > + (using the parity information distributed across the > + remaining drives) to the new drive is called > + Resilvering. Likewise, does "Resilvering" need to be capitalized? -Ben > > >