From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Sat Jan 7 11:38:18 2012 Return-Path: Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:4f8:fff6::34]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 60361106566B for ; Sat, 7 Jan 2012 11:38:18 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from bcr@FreeBSD.org) Received: from mxout1.bln1.prohost.de (mxout1.bln1.prohost.de [213.160.84.47]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id E82098FC12 for ; Sat, 7 Jan 2012 11:38:17 +0000 (UTC) Received: from Benedicts-Macbook-Pro.local (p4FC735AB.dip.t-dialin.net [79.199.53.171]) (authenticated bits=0) by mx1.bln1.prohost.de (8.14.1/8.14.1) with ESMTP id q07BcFbI020180 (version=TLSv1/SSLv3 cipher=DHE-RSA-AES256-SHA bits=256 verify=NO) for ; Sat, 7 Jan 2012 12:38:15 +0100 Message-ID: <4F082EA7.1010705@FreeBSD.org> Date: Sat, 07 Jan 2012 12:38:15 +0100 From: Benedict Reuschling Organization: The FreeBSD Project User-Agent: Mozilla/5.0 (Macintosh; Intel Mac OS X 10.7; rv:8.0) Gecko/20111105 Thunderbird/8.0 MIME-Version: 1.0 To: freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org References: <20120107.171103.193758902.ryusuke@jp.FreeBSD.org> In-Reply-To: <20120107.171103.193758902.ryusuke@jp.FreeBSD.org> X-Enigmail-Version: 1.3.4 OpenPGP: id=4A819348 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=ISO-8859-1 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit X-Null-Tag: 89ad10ab3bac5f6d1240ffe9cd92ecb2 Cc: Subject: Re: docs/159650: Call for review : Description of crash dump (developers-handbook) X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list Reply-To: bcr@FreeBSD.org List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Sat, 07 Jan 2012 11:38:18 -0000 -----BEGIN PGP SIGNED MESSAGE----- Hash: SHA1 Hello, Am 07.01.12 09:11, schrieb Ryusuke SUZUKI: > Hello, > > Last year, I took PR/159650. This PR is related to the crash dump. > http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=docs/159650 > > > As you know, "dumpdev" variable of rc.conf file is "AUTO" in HEAD, > but changed to "NO" on the stable branches. > > References > RELENG_9 : http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/cvsweb.cgi/src/etc/defaults/rc.conf#rev1.394.2.2 > RELENG_8 : http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/cvsweb.cgi/src/etc/defaults/rc.conf#rev1.358.2.2 > RELENG_6 : http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/cvsweb.cgi/src/etc/defaults/rc.conf#rev1.252.2.17 > > > However, developers-handbook "10.1.1 Configuring the Dump Device" only says > > "AUTO is the default as of FreeBSD 6.0." > > http://www.freebsd.org/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/developers-handbook/kerneldebug.html#CONFIG-DUMPDEV > > > We should update this sentence. Yes, we should. > > And I also would like to mention the crash dump menu of the bsdinstall, > recently kensmith@ added > http://docs.freebsd.org/cgi/getmsg.cgi?fetch=1485239+0+archive/2011/svn-src-all/20111204.svn-src-all > > Please review the follwoing patch: I've made a few corrections inline below. > > Index: chapter.sgml > =================================================================== > RCS file: /home/ryusuke/work/cvs-doc/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/developers-handbook/kerneldebug/chapter.sgml,v > retrieving revision 1.80 > diff -u -r1.80 chapter.sgml > --- chapter.sgml 2 Dec 2010 14:53:45 -0000 1.80 > +++ chapter.sgml 7 Jan 2012 06:54:34 -0000 > @@ -76,8 +76,13 @@ > &man.rc.conf.5; to the path of the swap device (the > recommended way to extract a kernel dump) or > AUTO to use the first configured swap > - device. AUTO is the default as of > - &os; 6.0. > + device. The defualt for dumpdev is s/defualt/default > + AUTO in HEAD, and changed to > + NO on RELENG_* branches (exceptionally, > + it leave AUTO in RELENG_7). Not sure what you mean by "leave" here, it does not sound right. Did you miss a word? You probably meant something like "... it is set to AUTO in RELENG_7. > + On &os; 9.0-RELEASE and later versions, > + bsdinstall will prompt if crash dumps > + should be enabled on the target system during the install process. > > Check /etc/fstab or > &man.swapinfo.8; for a list of swap devices. > The rest looks good to me. Regards Benedict Reuschling FreeBSD Documentation Committer The FreeBSD Documentation Project FreeBSD German Documentation Project - https://doc.bsdgroup.de -----BEGIN PGP SIGNATURE----- Version: GnuPG v1.4.8 (Darwin) Comment: GPGTools - http://gpgtools.org Comment: Using GnuPG with Mozilla - http://enigmail.mozdev.org/ iEYEARECAAYFAk8ILqcACgkQTSZQLkqBk0gQOQCfVTnlVgZHP2KhBSuhkfZSNO3M USEAoJwplZk3ivvGSnxCC5rNYiQJPOKS =FN80 -----END PGP SIGNATURE-----