From owner-svn-doc-head@FreeBSD.ORG Fri Mar 7 22:30:50 2014 Return-Path: Delivered-To: svn-doc-head@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [8.8.178.115]) (using TLSv1 with cipher ADH-AES256-SHA (256/256 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTPS id BF7A4FDB for ; Fri, 7 Mar 2014 22:30:50 +0000 (UTC) Received: from nm2-vm7.access.bullet.mail.gq1.yahoo.com (nm2-vm7.access.bullet.mail.gq1.yahoo.com [216.39.63.180]) (using TLSv1 with cipher DHE-RSA-AES256-SHA (256/256 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 807857F1 for ; Fri, 7 Mar 2014 22:30:50 +0000 (UTC) Received: from [216.39.60.176] by nm2.access.bullet.mail.gq1.yahoo.com with NNFMP; 07 Mar 2014 22:27:10 -0000 Received: from [216.39.60.247] by tm12.access.bullet.mail.gq1.yahoo.com with NNFMP; 07 Mar 2014 22:27:09 -0000 Received: from [127.0.0.1] by omp1018.access.mail.gq1.yahoo.com with NNFMP; 07 Mar 2014 22:27:09 -0000 X-Yahoo-Newman-Property: ymail-3 X-Yahoo-Newman-Id: 927233.77988.bm@omp1018.access.mail.gq1.yahoo.com Received: (qmail 49032 invoked by uid 60001); 7 Mar 2014 22:27:09 -0000 DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=att.net; s=s1024; t=1394231229; bh=605kZA6U8gFnIkfJ6lUmhHIIxkP+8bcX1wib8EhXNoc=; h=X-YMail-OSG:Received:X-Rocket-MIMEInfo:X-Mailer:References:Message-ID:Date:From:Reply-To:Subject:To:Cc:In-Reply-To:MIME-Version:Content-Type; b=KP6tmdzDsUPx8nV9grzBinOPzSEIocVdoTotwKOYu8VsIelJM1YXeEhi0KFCG7Y52WcRz2MpG3YnQ6CU5h4uKodVaGehCgjfCNq0NO7gxDqfyGcFGYC7QAYkxzsoZmcoMNszjsomolGn2PVf7kGXsk6TU42vvWcJ+baVkXkRU+g= DomainKey-Signature: a=rsa-sha1; q=dns; c=nofws; s=s1024; d=att.net; h=X-YMail-OSG:Received:X-Rocket-MIMEInfo:X-Mailer:References:Message-ID:Date:From:Reply-To:Subject:To:Cc:In-Reply-To:MIME-Version:Content-Type; b=q6hkVlS8e1/OPjFH0QjOvaT8T/0m0Q+Zr01FC9TbZqWXRYXdfXsNkGkPnCq7V0OXbtwkwKDBlD5AptZ9B8YYfe4yBHzu8QvDbl7gh6rwc3dSOYz8yXQrR8oWJeL/TBQ6/9+7huApETUEzwCOGu2CxYrPLyH1RuWcrk9XI/DWG04=; X-YMail-OSG: 9SVed2YVM1kLr3ZdIM_CHw5RUO_jzE4da8DNR.jIfdPTKAR eKd4Xy6R4UDCy_eCVmoaTwVdNzNm8XVg9PvtXQ62VI4L6WkNmtiOy4hvEg8c 3C287BVQQE.6WIi1X3TubHXQBCTLdC1MaL4oeWufrMJYEog9kPjtuEdn58z5 9wovATMzz6tFqAWCRGtHVedwMdsVm7FGlRhuF0GrCsAIFaFSK.mqy.uyF_tn 7wn6xfP0xT5mTQ3kYzLe38homfp1YMGngFvHrxtj7DCxRU87B4ALh7fJYHV1 rWcnDB7SzVoYTFZdTq5F0WPouV3ahiwXE7TXi3XXbi2BCQHexgbki.ZtPXAS Fg7qIvCflhlKpMrIicLQySNh8sr9AkJ.xjlLLTWGdvJgzA.QoWxBPInN4373 .B9DrmJvfLzQBeYjQW2g_mAjyOINMp1sovAvhuMfTWZNEZG5NbSSPPE9OktW aL3o9shaY3DqoJzOFRCizpPnDnmZNYmWcfsPmm1U7TNQulYniGmr9K1i.tEm 8XlD_rxsHmIF.P3vBii0.pB.HkTO9o5F3ufOQexHjOpK7X2L2CQmT_5DyyOq QWAEvwfIjrV7OPS9ACh7MFa11oc7U1srjKimR4QXLpyAMcyHm_wUCZIAQcut 7tJMYOaY- Received: from [99.98.83.69] by web184906.mail.gq1.yahoo.com via HTTP; Fri, 07 Mar 2014 14:27:09 PST X-Rocket-MIMEInfo: 002.001, R29vZCBwb2ludC4gVGhhbmtzIQoKRHJ1CgoKCgo.X19fX19fX19fX19fX19fX19fX19fX19fX19fX19fX18KPiBGcm9tOiBSZW1rbyBMb2RkZXIgPHJlbWtvQEZyZWVCU0Qub3JnPgo.VG86IERydSBMYXZpZ25lIDxkcnVAZnJlZWJzZC5vcmc.IAo.Q2M6IGRvYy1jb21taXR0ZXJzQGZyZWVic2Qub3JnOyBzdm4tZG9jLWFsbEBmcmVlYnNkLm9yZzsgc3ZuLWRvYy1oZWFkQGZyZWVic2Qub3JnIAo.U2VudDogRnJpZGF5LCBNYXJjaCA3LCAyMDE0IDU6MTkgUE0KPlN1YmplY3Q6IFJlOiBzdm4gY29tbWl0OiByNDQBMAEBAQE- X-Mailer: YahooMailWebService/0.8.177.636 References: <201403071642.s27GgbTr037300@svn.freebsd.org> <22293A4C-0F7F-45E9-8712-67465A6E50AB@FreeBSD.org> Message-ID: <1394231229.8505.YahooMailNeo@web184906.mail.gq1.yahoo.com> Date: Fri, 7 Mar 2014 14:27:09 -0800 (PST) From: Dru Lavigne Subject: Re: svn commit: r44176 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/advanced-networking To: Remko Lodder In-Reply-To: <22293A4C-0F7F-45E9-8712-67465A6E50AB@FreeBSD.org> MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=utf-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable X-Content-Filtered-By: Mailman/MimeDel 2.1.17 Cc: "svn-doc-head@freebsd.org" , "svn-doc-all@freebsd.org" , "doc-committers@freebsd.org" X-BeenThere: svn-doc-head@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.17 Precedence: list Reply-To: Dru Lavigne List-Id: SVN commit messages for the doc tree for head List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Fri, 07 Mar 2014 22:30:50 -0000 Good point. Thanks!=0A=0ADru=0A=0A=0A=0A=0A>_______________________________= _=0A> From: Remko Lodder =0A>To: Dru Lavigne =0A>Cc: doc-committers@freebsd.org; svn-doc-all@freebsd.org; svn-doc= -head@freebsd.org =0A>Sent: Friday, March 7, 2014 5:19 PM=0A>Subject: Re: s= vn commit: r44176 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/advanced-networking= =0A> =0A>=0A>=0A>On 07 Mar 2014, at 17:42, Dru Lavigne wr= ote:=0A>=0A>> Author: dru=0A>> Date: Fri Mar=C2=A0 7 16:42:37 2014=0A>> New= Revision: 44176=0A>> URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/44176=0A= >> =0A>> Log:=0A>>=C2=A0 Edits needed to close PR.=0A>=0A>These are rather.= .odd changelogs.. =0A>=0A>Would it be possible to describe the problem you = are trying to fix instead of =E2=80=98editing because a PR=E2=80=99? 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Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/writing-style/chapter.xml Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/writing-style/chapter.xml ============================================================================== --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/writing-style/chapter.xml Fri Mar 7 22:02:49 2014 (r44191) +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/writing-style/chapter.xml Sat Mar 8 00:15:43 2014 (r44192) @@ -325,6 +325,33 @@ sect1 chapter + Tags containing long attributes follow the same + rules. Following the indentation rules in this case helps + editors and writers see which content is inside the + tags: + + paraSee the link + linkend="gmirror-troubleshooting"Troubleshootinglink + section if there are problems booting. Powering down and + disconnecting the original filenameada0filename disk + will allow it to be kept as an offline backup.para + +paraIt is also possible to journal the boot disk of a &os; + system. Refer to the article link + xlink:href="&url.articles.gjournal-desktop;"Implementing UFS + Journaling on a Desktop PClink for detailed + instructions.para> + + When an element is too long to fit on the remainder of a + line without wrapping, moving the start tag to the next line + can make the source easier to read. In this example, the + systemitem element has been moved to the + next line to avoid wrapping and indenting: + + paraWith file flags, even + systemitem class="username"rootsystemitem can be + prevented from removing or altering files.para + Configurations to help various text editors conform to these guidelines can be found in .