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From: Murray Stokely <murray@FreeBSD.org>
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Subject: cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/backups chapter.sgml
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murray      2001/07/20 17:12:01 PDT

  Modified files:
    en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/backups chapter.sgml 
  Log:
  * Remove call for contributions from the synopsis of this chapter.  A
    call for help is listed on the third page of the printed Handbook or
    on the top level index for the HTML version and it need not be
    repeated here.
  * End all list items with a period, not just some of them.
  * Reword a couple of sentences so that they don't start with command
    names.
  * Reword a couple of confusing run-on sentences into more succinct
    sentences with a separate <note> with additional information.
  * Add a couple of missing words and remove some extra words to
    construct sentences that make sense.
  * Reworded paragraph with awkward "Either .. alternatively"
    construction.
  * Correct a reference to the Amanda port so that it looks good in
    printed form.  Dima's <port> tag would be helpful here.
  * Fix a couple of other minor typos.
  
  Revision  Changes    Path
  1.37      +99 -69    doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/backups/chapter.sgml


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