From owner-svn-doc-all@freebsd.org Wed Sep 18 08:05:03 2019 Return-Path: Delivered-To: svn-doc-all@mailman.nyi.freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2610:1c1:1:606c::19:1]) by mailman.nyi.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id A7DBDF6ABB; Wed, 18 Sep 2019 08:05:03 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from bcr@FreeBSD.org) Received: from mxrelay.nyi.freebsd.org (mxrelay.nyi.freebsd.org [IPv6:2610:1c1:1:606c::19:3]) (using TLSv1.3 with cipher TLS_AES_256_GCM_SHA384 (256/256 bits) server-signature RSA-PSS (4096 bits) client-signature RSA-PSS (4096 bits) client-digest SHA256) (Client CN "mxrelay.nyi.freebsd.org", Issuer "Let's Encrypt Authority X3" (verified OK)) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 46YCFW40K0z42Kd; Wed, 18 Sep 2019 08:05:03 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from bcr@FreeBSD.org) Received: from repo.freebsd.org (repo.freebsd.org [IPv6:2610:1c1:1:6068::e6a:0]) (using TLSv1.2 with cipher ECDHE-RSA-AES256-GCM-SHA384 (256/256 bits)) (Client did not present a certificate) by mxrelay.nyi.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 6892D220AC; Wed, 18 Sep 2019 08:05:03 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from bcr@FreeBSD.org) Received: from repo.freebsd.org ([127.0.1.37]) by repo.freebsd.org (8.15.2/8.15.2) with ESMTP id x8I853DQ030752; Wed, 18 Sep 2019 08:05:03 GMT (envelope-from bcr@FreeBSD.org) Received: (from bcr@localhost) by repo.freebsd.org (8.15.2/8.15.2/Submit) id x8I853f8030751; Wed, 18 Sep 2019 08:05:03 GMT (envelope-from bcr@FreeBSD.org) Message-Id: <201909180805.x8I853f8030751@repo.freebsd.org> X-Authentication-Warning: repo.freebsd.org: bcr set sender to bcr@FreeBSD.org using -f From: Benedict Reuschling Date: Wed, 18 Sep 2019 08:05:03 +0000 (UTC) To: doc-committers@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, svn-doc-head@freebsd.org Subject: svn commit: r53418 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/x11 X-SVN-Group: doc-head X-SVN-Commit-Author: bcr X-SVN-Commit-Paths: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/x11 X-SVN-Commit-Revision: 53418 X-SVN-Commit-Repository: doc MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit X-BeenThere: svn-doc-all@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.29 Precedence: list List-Id: "SVN commit messages for the entire doc trees \(except for " user" , " projects" , and " translations" \)" List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Wed, 18 Sep 2019 08:05:03 -0000 Author: bcr Date: Wed Sep 18 08:05:02 2019 New Revision: 53418 URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/53418 Log: Fix wording which was wrong ("the some") and remove another superfluous word in the same sentence while here. Put a sentence stop after the command to split this long sentence into two. PR: 240656 Submitted by: pauamma@gundo.com Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/x11/chapter.xml Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/x11/chapter.xml ============================================================================== --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/x11/chapter.xml Tue Sep 17 19:05:03 2019 (r53417) +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/x11/chapter.xml Wed Sep 18 08:05:02 2019 (r53418) @@ -1721,8 +1721,8 @@ hald_enable="YES" To immediately load the kernel module into the running - kernel by issuing a command like kldload - nvidia, however it has been noted that the some + kernel issue a command like kldload + nvidia. However, it has been noted that some versions of &xorg; will not function properly if the driver is not loaded at boot time. After editing /boot/loader.conf, a