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From: Giorgos Keramidas <keramida@FreeBSD.org>
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keramida    2006-10-23 07:08:58 UTC

  FreeBSD doc repository

  Modified files:
    en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/version-guide article.sgml 
  Log:
  o   Reword a bit in a couple of places, to avoid using 'necessary' and
      'need' twice in the same sentence.
  
  o   Replace <literal> tags with <emphasis> for `tag', `port' and
      `package' (they are really used as FreeBSD-specific terms, not as
      <literal> text here).
  
  o   Expand a paragraph with inline URIs, which result in pretty awkward
      line breaks in PDF/PS output, to a <variablelist>.  This separates
      the URIs from the running text, and looks slightly prettier in print
      output.
  
  Revision  Changes    Path
  1.10      +32 -18    doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/version-guide/article.sgml