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Date:      Thu, 9 Mar 2023 21:36:12 GMT
From:      Ceri Davies <ceri@FreeBSD.org>
To:        src-committers@FreeBSD.org, dev-commits-src-all@FreeBSD.org, dev-commits-src-main@FreeBSD.org
Subject:   git: 654b1e38c47f - main - man5/rc.conf.5: minor nitpicks to formatting, grammar, spelling
Message-ID:  <202303092136.329LaC9k026640@gitrepo.freebsd.org>

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The branch main has been updated by ceri:

URL: https://cgit.FreeBSD.org/src/commit/?id=654b1e38c47f4755b1da3918a20abd4ee73f3bb7

commit 654b1e38c47f4755b1da3918a20abd4ee73f3bb7
Author:     Ceri Davies <ceri@FreeBSD.org>
AuthorDate: 2023-03-09 21:35:03 +0000
Commit:     Ceri Davies <ceri@FreeBSD.org>
CommitDate: 2023-03-09 21:35:03 +0000

    man5/rc.conf.5: minor nitpicks to formatting, grammar, spelling
---
 share/man/man5/rc.conf.5 | 56 +++++++++++++++++++++++++-----------------------
 1 file changed, 29 insertions(+), 27 deletions(-)

diff --git a/share/man/man5/rc.conf.5 b/share/man/man5/rc.conf.5
index 055f97668375..0418f6043ac1 100644
--- a/share/man/man5/rc.conf.5
+++ b/share/man/man5/rc.conf.5
@@ -106,7 +106,7 @@ will be loaded.
 If
 .Ao Ar dir Ac Ns Pa /rc.conf.d/ Ns Ao Ar name Ac
 is a directory,
-all of files in the directory will be loaded.
+all of the files in the directory will be loaded.
 Also see the
 .Va rc_conf_files
 variable below.
@@ -472,7 +472,7 @@ directory.
 .Pq Vt bool
 Set to "YES" to enable saving of the
 .Pa /var/run
-directory strcucture into an mtree file at shutdown and the reload of the
+directory structure into an mtree file at shutdown and the reload of the
 .Pa /var/run
 directory structure at boot.
 .It Va var_run_autosave
@@ -484,13 +484,10 @@ When set to "NO"
 .Pa /var/run
 is loaded at reboot but not saved at shutdown.
 Typically in this scenario
-a
-.Pa service
-.Pa var_run
-.Pa save
+.Ql service var_run save
 would be performed to save a copy of the
 .Pa /var/run
-directory structure once, to be reload during all subsequent reboots.
+directory structure once, to be reloaded during all subsequent reboots.
 .It Va var_run_mtree
 .Pq Vt str
 Where to save the
@@ -773,7 +770,7 @@ is also set to
 Setting this to
 .Dq Li YES
 will enable netflow logging via
-.Xr ng_netflow 4
+.Xr ng_netflow 4 .
 .Pp
 By default a ipfw rule is inserted and all packets are duplicated with
 the ngtee command and netflow packets are sent to 127.0.0.1 on the netflow
@@ -1350,7 +1347,7 @@ Set to
 by default.
 This setting will be identical to
 .Dq Li YES ,
-if a dynamicrouting daemon is enabled, because redirect processing may
+if a dynamic routing daemon is enabled, because redirect processing may
 cause performance issues for large routing tables.
 If no such service is enabled, this setting behaves like a
 .Dq Li NO .
@@ -1524,7 +1521,7 @@ there is
 .Va ifconfig_ Ns Ao Ar interface Ac Ns Va _aliases
 variable, which has the same functionality as
 .Va ifconfig_ Ns Ao Ar interface Ac Ns Va _alias Ns Aq Ar n
-and can have all of entries in a variable like the following:
+and can have all of the entries in a variable like the following:
 .Bd -literal
 ifconfig_em0_aliases="\\
 	inet 127.0.0.251 netmask 0xffffffff \\
@@ -1570,7 +1567,7 @@ To create a vlan device named
 .Li em0.101
 on
 .Li em0
-with the vlan tag 101 and the optional the IPv4 address 192.0.2.1/24:
+with the vlan tag 101 and the optional IPv4 address 192.0.2.1/24:
 .Bd -literal
 vlans_em0="101"
 ifconfig_em0_101="inet 192.0.2.1/24"
@@ -1603,7 +1600,7 @@ command by setting the
 variable.
 One or more
 .Xr wlan 4
-devices must be created for each wireless devices as of
+devices must be created for each wireless device as of
 .Fx 8.0 .
 Debugging flags for
 .Xr wlan 4
@@ -1748,7 +1745,7 @@ all interfaces which do not have a corresponding
 variable will be marked as
 .Dq Li IFDISABLED
 at creation.
-This means that all of IPv6 functionality on that interface
+This means that all IPv6 functionality on that interface
 is completely disabled to enforce a security policy.
 If the variable is set to
 .Dq YES ,
@@ -1850,7 +1847,7 @@ IPv6 functionality on an interface should be configured by
 .Va ifconfig_ Ns Ao Ar interface Ac Ns _ipv6 ,
 instead of setting ifconfig parameters in
 .Va ifconfig_ Ns Aq Ar interface .
-If this variable is empty, all of IPv6 configurations on the
+If this variable is empty, all IPv6 configurations on the
 specified interface by other variables such as
 .Va ipv6_prefix_ Ns Ao Ar interface Ac
 will be ignored.
@@ -2133,7 +2130,7 @@ include the full path to the file.
 By default, the files specified are
 .Pa /etc/rc.conf
 and
-.Pa /etc/rc.conf.local
+.Pa /etc/rc.conf.local .
 .It Va zfs_enable
 .Pq Vt bool
 If set to
@@ -2149,8 +2146,8 @@ This is useful when using a ZFS pool copied from a template, such as a virtual
 machine image.
 .It Va zpool_upgrade
 .Pq Vt str
-A space-separated list of ZFS pool names for which version should be upgraded
-upon first boot.
+A space-separated list of ZFS pool names for which the version should be
+upgraded upon first boot.
 This is useful when using a ZFS pool generated by the
 .Xr makefs 8
 utility.
@@ -2170,7 +2167,7 @@ utility.
 If set to
 .Dq Li YES ,
 .Pa /etc/rc.d/gbde
-will attempt to automatically initialize your .bde devices in
+will attempt to automatically initialize the .bde devices specified in
 .Pa /etc/fstab .
 .It Va gbde_devices
 .Pq Vt str
@@ -2480,12 +2477,12 @@ these are the flags to pass to it.
 .Pq Vt bool
 If set to
 .Dq Li YES ,
-.Pa /etc/motd
+.Pa /var/run/motd
 will be updated at boot time to reflect the kernel release
 being run.
 If set to
 .Dq Li NO ,
-.Pa /etc/motd
+.Pa /var/run/motd
 will not be updated.
 .It Va nfs_client_enable
 .Pq Vt bool
@@ -2943,7 +2940,7 @@ If set to
 run the
 .Xr bsnmpd 1
 daemon at system boot time.
-Be sure to understand the security implications of running SNMP daemon
+Be sure to understand the security implications of running an SNMP daemon
 on your host.
 .It Va bsnmpd_flags
 .Pq Vt str
@@ -3085,10 +3082,14 @@ If
 is set to
 .Dq Li YES ,
 this is the name of the routing daemon to use.
+The default is
+.Xr routed 8 .
 .It Va route6d_program
 .Pq Vt str
 The IPv6 equivalent of
 .Va routed_program .
+The default is
+.Xr route6d 8 .
 .It Va routed_flags
 .Pq Vt str
 If
@@ -3367,15 +3368,15 @@ This is the protocol type of the mouse connected to this host.
 This variable must be set if
 .Va moused_enable
 is set to
-.Dq Li YES .
-The
+.Dq Li YES ,
+but defaults to
+.Dq Li auto
+as the
 .Xr moused 8
 daemon
 is able to detect the appropriate mouse type automatically in many cases.
 Set this variable to
-.Dq Li auto
-to let the daemon detect it, or
-select one from the following list if the automatic detection fails.
+one from the following list if the automatic detection fails.
 .Pp
 If the mouse is attached to the PS/2 mouse port, choose
 .Dq Li auto
@@ -4282,7 +4283,7 @@ is also increased.
 Set to
 .Dq Li NO
 to prevent the system from trying to
-recover pre-maturely terminated
+recover prematurely terminated
 .Xr vi 1
 sessions.
 .It Va ugidfw_enable
@@ -5009,6 +5010,7 @@ these are the flags to pass to the
 .Xr rcorder 8 ,
 .Xr rfcomm_pppd 8 ,
 .Xr route 8 ,
+.Xr rout6ed 8 ,
 .Xr routed 8 ,
 .Xr rpc.lockd 8 ,
 .Xr rpc.statd 8 ,



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