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Subject: svn commit: r47088 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/introduction
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Author: dru
Date: Sun Jul 26 08:51:25 2015
New Revision: 47088
URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/47088

Log:
  Fix redundancy.
  
  Sponsored by: Essen Devsummit Hackathon

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/introduction/chapter.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/introduction/chapter.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/introduction/chapter.xml	Sun Jul 26 08:42:11 2015	(r47087)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/introduction/chapter.xml	Sun Jul 26 08:51:25 2015	(r47088)
@@ -1142,8 +1142,8 @@
 	      <emphasis>write</emphasis> access to the Subversion
 	      tree, and are authorized to make modifications to the
 	      &os; source (the term <quote>committer</quote> comes
-	      from the source control <command>commit</command>
-	      command, which is used to bring new changes into the
+	      from <command>commit</command>, the source control
+	      command which is used to bring new changes into the
 	      repository).  The best way of making submissions for
 	      review is to use the &man.send-pr.1; command, which is
 	      included in releases prior to &os;&nbsp;10.1, or submit