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Cc: Daniel Gerzo <danger@freebsd.org>, doc-committers@freebsd.org,
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Subject: Re: cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook Makefile
	book.sgml chapters.ent doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/jails
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On 2007-03-23 11:56, Ganbold <ganbold@micom.mng.net> wrote:
> Daniel Gerzo wrote:
> >danger      2007-03-22 20:30:18 UTC
> >  Revision  Changes    Path
> >  1.101     +1 -0      doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/Makefile
> >  1.170     +2 -0      doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/book.sgml
> >  1.36      +1 -0      doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/chapters.ent
> >  1.1       +463 -0    doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/jails/chapter.sgml (new)
>  
> Thanks for the great new chapter (one more chapter is added to my
> translation work :().
> 
> The following sentence seems to be missing parentheses.
> 
>      <para>Attach to a running jail, from its host system, and run
>        a command inside the jail administrative tasks inside the
>        jail itself).
> 
> It could be:
> 
>      <para>Attach to a running jail, from its host system, and run
>        a command inside the jail (administrative tasks inside the
>        jail itself).

I have some local changes around this area.  When we commit the patch,
after Daniel's review, it's probably going to change a bit.  But thanks
for the careful reading :)