From owner-cvs-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Sat Mar 24 01:17:42 2007 Return-Path: X-Original-To: cvs-doc@freebsd.org Delivered-To: cvs-doc@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [69.147.83.52]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id AA72B16A402; Sat, 24 Mar 2007 01:17:42 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from keramida@freebsd.org) Received: from igloo.linux.gr (igloo.linux.gr [62.1.205.36]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 2417213C46E; Sat, 24 Mar 2007 01:17:41 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from keramida@freebsd.org) Received: from kobe.laptop (host5.bedc.ondsl.gr [62.103.39.229]) (authenticated bits=128) by igloo.linux.gr (8.13.8/8.13.8/Debian-3) with ESMTP id l2O1H901017009 (version=TLSv1/SSLv3 cipher=DHE-RSA-AES256-SHA bits=256 verify=NOT); Sat, 24 Mar 2007 03:17:16 +0200 Received: from kobe.laptop (kobe.laptop [127.0.0.1]) by kobe.laptop (8.13.8/8.13.8) with ESMTP id l2O1GnCT018090; Sat, 24 Mar 2007 03:17:01 +0200 (EET) (envelope-from keramida@freebsd.org) Received: (from keramida@localhost) by kobe.laptop (8.13.8/8.13.8/Submit) id l2O1GlwK018089; Sat, 24 Mar 2007 03:16:47 +0200 (EET) (envelope-from keramida@freebsd.org) Date: Sat, 24 Mar 2007 03:16:47 +0200 From: Giorgos Keramidas To: Ganbold Message-ID: <20070324011647.GA18057@kobe.laptop> References: <200703222030.l2MKUJjp012740@repoman.freebsd.org> <46034FFC.60001@micom.mng.net> MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii Content-Disposition: inline In-Reply-To: <46034FFC.60001@micom.mng.net> X-Hellug-MailScanner: Found to be clean X-Hellug-MailScanner-SpamCheck: not spam, SpamAssassin (not cached, score=-3.773, required 5, autolearn=not spam, ALL_TRUSTED -1.80, AWL 0.63, BAYES_00 -2.60) X-Hellug-MailScanner-From: keramida@freebsd.org X-Spam-Status: No Cc: Daniel Gerzo , doc-committers@freebsd.org, cvs-doc@freebsd.org, cvs-all@freebsd.org Subject: Re: cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook Makefile book.sgml chapters.ent doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/jails chapter.sgml X-BeenThere: cvs-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list List-Id: CVS commit messages for the doc and www trees List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Sat, 24 Mar 2007 01:17:42 -0000 On 2007-03-23 11:56, Ganbold wrote: > Daniel Gerzo wrote: > >danger 2007-03-22 20:30:18 UTC > > Revision Changes Path > > 1.101 +1 -0 doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/Makefile > > 1.170 +2 -0 doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/book.sgml > > 1.36 +1 -0 doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/chapters.ent > > 1.1 +463 -0 doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/jails/chapter.sgml (new) > > Thanks for the great new chapter (one more chapter is added to my > translation work :(). > > The following sentence seems to be missing parentheses. > > Attach to a running jail, from its host system, and run > a command inside the jail administrative tasks inside the > jail itself). > > It could be: > > Attach to a running jail, from its host system, and run > a command inside the jail (administrative tasks inside the > jail itself). I have some local changes around this area. When we commit the patch, after Daniel's review, it's probably going to change a bit. But thanks for the careful reading :)