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From: Warren Block <wblock@wonkity.com>
To: Benjamin Kaduk <kaduk@MIT.EDU>
Subject: Re: svn commit: r42089 -
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On Sun, 30 Jun 2013, Benjamin Kaduk wrote:

> On Sun, 30 Jun 2013, Warren Block wrote:
>
>> Author: wblock
>> Date: Sun Jun 30 01:52:06 2013
>> New Revision: 42089
>> URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/42089
>> 
>> Log:
>>  Content updates: replace FreeBSD with &os; where appropriate, rewrite a
>>  stilted paragraph on SSH.
>> 
>> Modified:
>>  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/committers-guide/article.xml
>> 
>> Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/committers-guide/article.xml
>> ==============================================================================
>> --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/committers-guide/article.xml	Sun 
>> Jun 30 01:37:37 2013	(r42088)
>> +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/committers-guide/article.xml	Sun 
>> Jun 30 01:52:06 2013	(r42089)
>> @@ -149,27 +149,26 @@
>>       </tgroup>
>>     </informaltable>
>> 
>> -    <para>It is required that you use &man.ssh.1; to connect to the
>> -      project hosts.  If you do not know anything about &man.ssh.1;,
>> -      please see <xref linkend="ssh.guide"/>.</para>
>> +    <para>&man.ssh.1; is required to connect to the projecte hosts.
>
> Spurious 'e' ("projecte")?

Whoops.  Fixed, thanks!