From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Tue Dec 2 20:46:32 2008 Return-Path: Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:4f8:fff6::34]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 6AD801065677 for ; Tue, 2 Dec 2008 20:46:32 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from sonic2000gr@gmail.com) Received: from ug-out-1314.google.com (ug-out-1314.google.com [66.249.92.168]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id E96C08FC1B for ; Tue, 2 Dec 2008 20:46:31 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from sonic2000gr@gmail.com) Received: by ug-out-1314.google.com with SMTP id 30so3053186ugs.39 for ; Tue, 02 Dec 2008 12:46:30 -0800 (PST) DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=gmail.com; s=gamma; h=domainkey-signature:received:received:message-id:date:from :user-agent:mime-version:to:cc:subject:references:in-reply-to :content-type:content-transfer-encoding; bh=iU/Uq0k/WleTtbEHVIOs8+YXEAtE4C9XneNStG48g5Y=; b=OBxx/uNDe85pDZKksJzaVeBOr4TZA/74muw8DWJav9HAJPM3/rPpWWUjh48PelfC+h LWMFcr+DrePSOqPu7MByxTe1USaL9Vt5TyIceqZ1CoxReJGckvGiTBBvqyts+vK7mNss 7oIFgE7liA+DzSImrOsIKzK99RVwwYRj+BixA= DomainKey-Signature: a=rsa-sha1; c=nofws; d=gmail.com; s=gamma; h=message-id:date:from:user-agent:mime-version:to:cc:subject :references:in-reply-to:content-type:content-transfer-encoding; b=SWiTEsPjZhjg2LvZn65/vkWgpDc4K+CAUsJDFelhCa6+692+Kd9ijFYVygU/qzJN7y 2vZ0dHPQgulzfcBe+97uZIQXfj39FfQVJMfR9PVv5VUbyGMtAiB/Wlz2JQ0geR4Nx3zT SjR5Ri6zVVLLFsppeJd0Y5qoYULcVXsl6FWFo= Received: by 10.66.241.13 with SMTP id o13mr1037640ugh.31.1228250790531; Tue, 02 Dec 2008 12:46:30 -0800 (PST) Received: from atlantis.dyndns.org (athedsl-311450.home.otenet.gr [85.72.72.56]) by mx.google.com with ESMTPS id k30sm12296618ugc.25.2008.12.02.12.46.27 (version=TLSv1/SSLv3 cipher=RC4-MD5); Tue, 02 Dec 2008 12:46:28 -0800 (PST) Message-ID: <49359EA1.3080600@gmail.com> Date: Tue, 02 Dec 2008 22:46:25 +0200 From: Manolis Kiagias User-Agent: Thunderbird 2.0.0.17 (X11/20081011) MIME-Version: 1.0 To: Gabor PALI References: <493155ED.8020004@FreeBSD.org> <49316309.1050407@gmail.com> <49330A66.8040801@FreeBSD.org> <20081201091730.0ef555fa.trhodes@FreeBSD.org> <49359784.504@FreeBSD.org> In-Reply-To: <49359784.504@FreeBSD.org> Content-Type: text/plain; charset=ISO-8859-1 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit Cc: Tom Rhodes , freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org Subject: Re: RFR: A "Boot Time Splash Screens" Section to the Handbook X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Tue, 02 Dec 2008 20:46:32 -0000 Gabor PALI wrote: > >> Hope that helps. >> > > Of course! Thank you again. > > > Here is the next iteration: > > (patch version): > http://people.freebsd.org/~pgj/patches/2008/12/02/splash.screen.section.patch.diff > > (HTML version): > http://people.freebsd.org/~pgj/patches/2008/12/02/html/boot-blocks.html#BOOT-SPLASH > > > Regards, > :g > > I like the improvements too :) If I were to make a few changes (at the edge of these being doc-bikesheds): - Maybe find another way to describe the console login rather than "legacy virtual console login prompt". Although this may be very accurate I think it can be shortened sowewhat and still carry the same meaning. Esp. since it is mentioned a few times. - The word intensity is mentioned three times in a row "cycle through steps of changing intensity of the image, from bright intensity to a very dark intensity and over again." => I would probably change this to "cycle through steps of changing intensity of the image, from bright to very dark and over again." This is minor stuff of course, and as I said it might just be my own color. (off to find a nice boot screen for my Aspire one :) ) manolis@