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From: Dima Dorfman <dima@unixfreak.org>
Subject: Re: docs/26690: Update to ports(7) 
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The following reply was made to PR docs/26690; it has been noted by GNATS.

From: Dima Dorfman <dima@unixfreak.org>
To: petef@databits.net
Cc: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@freebsd.org
Subject: Re: docs/26690: Update to ports(7) 
Date: Wed, 18 Apr 2001 19:19:01 -0700

 petef@databits.net writes:
 > >Fix:
 > 
 > Index: ports.7
 > ===================================================================
 > RCS file: /home/ncvs/src/share/man/man7/ports.7,v
 > retrieving revision 1.21
 > diff -u -r1.21 ports.7
 > [...]
 > @@ -186,6 +188,20 @@
 >  This can be used from
 >  .Pa /usr/ports
 >  to create a browsable web of all ports on your system!
 > +.It Ar search
 > +Search the INDEX file for the keyword specified by the 
 
 This should be:
 
 Search the
 .Pa INDEX
 file for the....
 
 > +.Ev KEY
 
 ``KEY'' is not an environment variable.  Perhaps you could explain
 that the syntax is `make search name=query' and `make search
 key=query'.  Ideally it wouldn't be too long.
 
 > +value.  Results include the path to the port, a short comment, and the
 
 Please put a newline instead of two spaces at the end of sentences, e.g.:
 
 value.
 Results include the path...
 
 > +build and run depends required.
 > +.It Ar index
 > +Create /usr/ports/INDEX, used by the
 > +.Pa pretty-print-*
 > +and
 > +.Pa search
 
 This should be:
 
 Create
 .Pa /usr/ports/INDEX ,
 which is used by the
 .Ar pretty-print-*
 and
 .Ar search
 targets.
 
 Other than that (and a few other places you made the same errors) it
 looks pretty good.  If you could fix that up I'd appreciate it.
 
 Thanks,
 
 					Dima Dorfman
 					dima@unixfreak.org
 

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