From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Sat Nov 29 13:47:42 2008 Return-Path: Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:4f8:fff6::34]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 750F11065686 for ; Sat, 29 Nov 2008 13:47:42 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from r.c.ladan@gmail.com) Received: from yw-out-2324.google.com (yw-out-2324.google.com [74.125.46.29]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 3767B8FC19 for ; Sat, 29 Nov 2008 13:47:41 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from r.c.ladan@gmail.com) Received: by yw-out-2324.google.com with SMTP id 9so711026ywe.13 for ; Sat, 29 Nov 2008 05:47:41 -0800 (PST) DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=gmail.com; s=gamma; h=domainkey-signature:received:received:message-id:date:from:to :subject:cc:in-reply-to:mime-version:content-type :content-transfer-encoding:content-disposition:references; bh=mjO93w0bNA9Fch9E9gBoF8H97eLr3CzGTjADDVQTDs8=; b=e6O5LpDUM4GUUD29bxLL37VoDlWUy+E4xDN+InHJdcwTeCVxCiW6MqOeT5Xe97LvaL Oj1wgAzAvgh/Q0+8e4eKTHsuNhclw/y4zlUS0y9rHVrvw1c/W+dVAREyPcWl9Nwz+3ZH /nwRXwYCFk6sHqqWVs4GgyvCVvssR58mcYjiM= DomainKey-Signature: a=rsa-sha1; c=nofws; d=gmail.com; s=gamma; h=message-id:date:from:to:subject:cc:in-reply-to:mime-version :content-type:content-transfer-encoding:content-disposition :references; b=osEJhxhDzl4ydVsGl7MqtY9+8IPu28MyLr/g+X4uBCa/97zMxqTFSpCPz7BrugoDSG 41S6gddlkym61E6H0cMxzwtdgysryg99AO1NQC8FsQaFsmM4qGtLLBy4jh8+IDvsfSyq mgjyXSKJGi/URaiMlpCyBbCLKJZI4lpotOYFk= Received: by 10.151.48.15 with SMTP id a15mr843505ybk.189.1227966461452; Sat, 29 Nov 2008 05:47:41 -0800 (PST) Received: by 10.150.54.9 with HTTP; Sat, 29 Nov 2008 05:47:41 -0800 (PST) Message-ID: Date: Sat, 29 Nov 2008 14:47:41 +0100 From: "Rene Ladan" To: "Gabor PALI" In-Reply-To: <4930A475.2010908@FreeBSD.org> MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=ISO-8859-1 Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable Content-Disposition: inline References: <49309E91.7050006@FreeBSD.org> <4930A131.60108@FreeBSD.org> <4930A475.2010908@FreeBSD.org> Cc: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org, =?ISO-8859-1?Q?G=E1bor_K=F6vesd=E1n?= Subject: Re: RFR: A Pack of Patches for Chapter "SGML Markup" in FDP Primer X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Sat, 29 Nov 2008 13:47:42 -0000 2008/11/29 Gabor PALI : > G=E1bor K=F6vesd=E1n wrote: >> Wow! The new pgj patchbombs are arriving. :) >> > > Sorry, I think I missed to upload and link the largest one: > > http://people.freebsd.org/~pgj/patches/2008/11/29/doc.en.books.fdp-primer= .sgml-markup.patch/0.diff > > In this patch, I suggest a capitalization according to the "headline > style" of Chicago Manual of Style (15th Edition), paragraph 8.167. > > The patches look fine to me. Maybe you can replace some instances of "FreeBSD" with "&os;" while you're at it. I'm slightly amazed that the book built with incorrect tags (see patch 11). But the documentation seems to build with missing end tags in general. Is = there a way to check this automatically? Regards, Rene --=20 http://www.rene-ladan.nl/ GPG fingerprint =3D E738 5471 D185 7013 0EE0 4FC8 3C1D 6F83 12E1 84F6 (subkeys.pgp.net)