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Author: gjb
Date: Sat Nov 24 22:57:34 2012
New Revision: 40148
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/40148

Log:
  '8.0' should not be within <replaceable> tags.
  s/Those/Such/
  Misc wordsmithing.
  
  Submitted by:	bjk, wblock

Modified:
  projects/pkgng/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ports/chapter.xml

Modified: projects/pkgng/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ports/chapter.xml
==============================================================================
--- projects/pkgng/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ports/chapter.xml	Sat Nov 24 07:12:46 2012	(r40147)
+++ projects/pkgng/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ports/chapter.xml	Sat Nov 24 22:57:34 2012	(r40148)
@@ -691,7 +691,7 @@ docbook                     =
 	<para>The <application>pkgng</application> package management
 	  utility is not supported on
 	  &os;&nbsp;7.<replaceable>X</replaceable> or
-	  &os;&nbsp;8.<replaceable>0</replaceable>.</para>
+	  &os;&nbsp;8.0.</para>
       </note>
 
       <para>Existing &os; installations require conversion of the
@@ -904,7 +904,7 @@ Upgrading curl from 7.24.0 to 7.24.0_1..
 	<para>Removing a package may leave behind unnecessary
 	  dependencies, like <filename
 	    role="package">security/ca_root_nss</filename> in the example
-	  above.  Those packages are still installed, but nothing
+	  above.  Such packages are still installed, but nothing
 	  depends on them any more.  Unneeded packages that were
 	  installed as dependencies can be automatically detected and
 	  removed:</para>
@@ -966,7 +966,7 @@ Deinstalling ca_root_nss-3.13.5... done<
 	  versions of the upgraded packages are not automatically
 	  removed.</para>
 
-	<para>To remove the outdated binary packages from the system,
+	<para>To remove the outdated binary packages,
 	  run:</para>
 
 	<screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>pkg clean</userinput></screen>