From owner-freebsd-doc Tue Apr 16 9:44:14 2002 Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Received: from smarthost1.mail.easynet.fr (smarthost1.mail.easynet.fr [212.180.1.68]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id DDF8337B416 for ; Tue, 16 Apr 2002 09:44:06 -0700 (PDT) Received: from blackend.org ([212.11.50.35] helo=gothic.blackend.org) by smarthost1.mail.easynet.fr with esmtp (Exim 3.12 #1 (Debian)) id 16xW3p-0006Uv-00 for ; Tue, 16 Apr 2002 18:44:05 +0200 Received: (from marc@localhost) by gothic.blackend.org (8.11.6/8.11.6/ - 15/04/02) id g3GGhLN50029 for freebsd-doc@freebsd.org; Tue, 16 Apr 2002 18:43:21 +0200 (CEST) (envelope-from marc) Date: Tue, 16 Apr 2002 18:43:21 +0200 From: Marc Fonvieille To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Subject: some patches for some articles Message-ID: <20020416184321.A49997@gothic.blackend.org> Mime-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii Content-Disposition: inline User-Agent: Mutt/1.2.5.1i X-Useless-Header: blackend.org X-Operating-System: FreeBSD 4.5-STABLE Sender: owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Precedence: bulk List-ID: List-Archive: (Web Archive) List-Help: (List Instructions) List-Subscribe: List-Unsubscribe: X-Loop: FreeBSD.org Hello, I'm currently translating some articles, so during my work i note some problems (indentation, typos etc...). Since i want to avoid *wrong pr* :) , i will provide patches on my site... 1- laptop article after my mistakes in my previous pr, here's a patch for correcting bad indentation: http://www.blackend.org/doc/articles/laptop/article.sgml.diff1 2- laptop article again, some caps missed on 'PC-Card', and some weird use of ( ) corrected: http://www.blackend.org/doc/articles/laptop/article.sgml.diff2 this patche must be applied after previous one. 3- dialup-firewall article, addition of missing whitespaces after final dot ;) and indentation fixed: http://www.blackend.org/doc/articles/dialup-firewall/article.sgml.diff 4- java-tomcat article, a typo fixed: http://www.blackend.org/doc/articles/java-tomcat/article.sgml.diff If i'm wrong in my corrections, please tell me, as all will be useful to help me in my translations. Marc To Unsubscribe: send mail to majordomo@FreeBSD.org with "unsubscribe freebsd-doc" in the body of the message