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Date:      Thu, 28 Feb 2019 20:43:04 +0000 (UTC)
From:      Tom Rhodes <trhodes@FreeBSD.org>
To:        src-committers@freebsd.org, svn-src-all@freebsd.org, svn-src-head@freebsd.org
Subject:   svn commit: r344665 - head/sbin/ipfw
Message-ID:  <201902282043.x1SKh475082389@repo.freebsd.org>

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Author: trhodes (doc committer)
Date: Thu Feb 28 20:43:03 2019
New Revision: 344665
URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/base/344665

Log:
  Grammar tweaks in ipfw manual page.

Modified:
  head/sbin/ipfw/ipfw.8

Modified: head/sbin/ipfw/ipfw.8
==============================================================================
--- head/sbin/ipfw/ipfw.8	Thu Feb 28 19:27:54 2019	(r344664)
+++ head/sbin/ipfw/ipfw.8	Thu Feb 28 20:43:03 2019	(r344665)
@@ -233,7 +233,7 @@ or
 .Cm limit
 rule, and are typically used to open the firewall on-demand to
 legitimate traffic only.
-Please, note, that
+Please note, that
 .Cm keep-state
 amd
 .Cm limit
@@ -684,8 +684,8 @@ is set to 0 (default), one can use
 attached to the
 .Li ipfw0
 pseudo interface.
-This pseudo interface can be created after a boot
-manually by using the following command:
+This pseudo interface can be created manually after a system
+boot by using the following command:
 .Bd -literal -offset indent
 # ifconfig ipfw0 create
 .Ed
@@ -698,7 +698,7 @@ file:
 firewall_logif="YES"
 .Ed
 .Pp
-There is no overhead if no
+There is zero overhead when no
 .Xr bpf 4
 is attached to the pseudo interface.
 .Pp



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