Date: Mon, 17 Nov 2003 17:05:41 -0500 From: Tom Rhodes <trhodes@FreeBSD.org> To: "Simon L. Nielsen" <simon@FreeBSD.org> Cc: Joe Marcus Clarke <marcus@FreeBSD.org> Subject: Re: DocBook help Message-ID: <20031117170541.1a05bbb7.trhodes@FreeBSD.org> In-Reply-To: <20031117215514.GB405@arthur.nitro.dk> References: <1068365672.64416.2.camel@shumai.marcuscom.com> <20031109031918.40437858.trhodes@FreeBSD.org> <1068366438.64416.8.camel@shumai.marcuscom.com> <20031116173729.GC5895@electra.cse.Buffalo.EDU> <1069007319.3752.11.camel@shumai.marcuscom.com> <20031117043515.GA16285@electra.cse.Buffalo.EDU> <20031117213239.GA345@jenny.daemon.li> <1069104837.737.71.camel@gyros> <20031117215514.GB405@arthur.nitro.dk>
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On Mon, 17 Nov 2003 22:55:15 +0100 "Simon L. Nielsen" <simon@freebsd.org> wrote: > On 2003.11.17 16:33:57 -0500, Joe Marcus Clarke wrote: > > On Mon, 2003-11-17 at 16:32, Josef El-Rayes wrote: > > > Ken Smith <kensmith@cse.Buffalo.EDU> wrote: > > > > On Sun, Nov 16, 2003 at 01:28:39PM -0500, Joe Marcus Clarke wrote: > > > > > > > > > Yeah, that's fine. Thanks! > > > > > > > > How's this? It's viewable in a very stripped-down web version at: > > > > > > > > http://www.cse.buffalo.edu/~kensmith/FreeBSD/cluster_article.html > > > > > > > > Fixed, thanks! > > Now that we are at the little things... :-) > > When you use the trademark entities in the body of the text, then the > coresponding attributions entities should be used in the header. Since you > use sparc and i386 it should be like this: > > <legalnotice id="trademarks" role="trademarks"> > &tm-attrib.freebsd; > &tm-attrib.intel; > &tm-attrib.sparc; > &tm-attrib.general; > </legalnotice> > > I also noticed that there are some end-of-line whitespace in the SGML > file which should be removed, and some spaces in the beginnig of lines, > which should be tabs (see [1]). > > [1] http://www.freebsd.org/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/writing-style.html#WRITING-STYLE-GUIDE The primer could probably use a workover, although who has the time. It should include information on some markup, information about the trademarks, and a better explination of (and example) of adding a chapter and using the article framework. If any of these 'issues' have been fixed, then please pardon my ignorance. -- Tom Rhodes
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