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From: Tom Rhodes <trhodes@FreeBSD.org>
Date: Fri, 4 Oct 2002 19:15:42 -0700 (PDT)
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Subject: cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/config chapter.sgml
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trhodes     2002/10/04 19:15:42 PDT

  Modified files:
    en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/config chapter.sgml 
  Log:
  Grammar nits.  Remove dead words and redundant sentences.  Reword a few areas to remove the
  'you' which appeared in almost every other line.  One quick markup fix.
  
  Revision  Changes    Path
  1.60      +70 -84    doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/config/chapter.sgml

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