From owner-cvs-all@FreeBSD.ORG Sun Dec 5 00:55:16 2004 Return-Path: Delivered-To: cvs-all@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.FreeBSD.org (mx1.freebsd.org [216.136.204.125]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 2B13316A4D0; Sun, 5 Dec 2004 00:55:16 +0000 (GMT) Received: from pittgoth.com (14.zlnp1.xdsl.nauticom.net [209.195.149.111]) by mx1.FreeBSD.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id B879043D1F; Sun, 5 Dec 2004 00:55:15 +0000 (GMT) (envelope-from trhodes@FreeBSD.org) Received: from localhost (ip68-100-2-61.dc.dc.cox.net [68.100.2.61]) (authenticated bits=0) by pittgoth.com (8.12.10/8.12.10) with ESMTP id iB50tEag073997 (version=TLSv1/SSLv3 cipher=DHE-RSA-AES256-SHA bits=256 verify=NOT); Sat, 4 Dec 2004 19:55:15 -0500 (EST) (envelope-from trhodes@FreeBSD.org) Date: Sat, 4 Dec 2004 19:55:21 -0500 From: Tom Rhodes To: Murray Stokely Message-ID: <20041204195521.6a5d33e1@localhost> In-Reply-To: <200412050014.iB50EMgA007188@repoman.freebsd.org> References: <200412050014.iB50EMgA007188@repoman.freebsd.org> X-Mailer: Sylpheed-Claws 0.9.12b (GTK+ 1.2.10; i386-portbld-freebsd5.3) Mime-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=US-ASCII Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit cc: doc-committers@FreeBSD.org cc: cvs-doc@FreeBSD.org cc: cvs-all@FreeBSD.org Subject: Re: cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook Makefile doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/firewalls Makefile chapter.sgml doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/security chapter.sgml X-BeenThere: cvs-all@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.1 Precedence: list List-Id: CVS commit messages for the entire tree List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Sun, 05 Dec 2004 00:55:16 -0000 On Sun, 5 Dec 2004 00:14:22 +0000 (UTC) Murray Stokely wrote: > murray 2004-12-05 00:14:22 UTC > > FreeBSD doc repository > > Modified files: > en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook Makefile book.sgml chapters.ent > en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/security chapter.sgml > Added files: > en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/firewalls Makefile chapter.sgml > Log: > Remove the bulging firewalls section from the security chapter into a > new chapter all its own, currently in the 'network communications' > part as chapter 24. > > Add a small paragraph at the bottom of the security chapter synopsis > noting that additional security topics are covered in the MAC chapter > and the Firewall chapter. > > While here add some missing punctuation, cleanup the whitespace, add > missing tags, add a synopsis, and of course > s/