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Author: wblock
Date: Sat Oct 27 21:45:15 2012
New Revision: 39822
URL: http://svn.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/39822

Log:
  Adjust wording for better English.

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/book.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/book.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/book.xml	Sat Oct 27 20:44:23 2012	(r39821)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/book.xml	Sat Oct 27 21:45:15 2012	(r39822)
@@ -15810,8 +15810,8 @@ Reference: &lt;http://www.freebsd.org/po
 	    <row>
 	      <entry>1000021</entry>
 	      <entry>October 22, 2012</entry>
-	      <entry>10-CURRENT after the removal of support for
-		non-MPSAFE filesystems and the add of support for
+	      <entry>10-CURRENT after removal of support for
+		non-MPSAFE filesystems and addition of support for
 		FUSEFS (rev
 		<svnref>241519</svnref>,
 		<svnref>241897</svnref>).</entry>