From owner-svn-doc-head@FreeBSD.ORG Wed Feb 27 21:23:58 2013 Return-Path: Delivered-To: svn-doc-head@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.FreeBSD.org [8.8.178.115]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 4559AA7F; Wed, 27 Feb 2013 21:23:58 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from eadler@FreeBSD.org) Received: from svn.freebsd.org (svn.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:1900:2254:2068::e6a:0]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 35D258C; Wed, 27 Feb 2013 21:23:58 +0000 (UTC) Received: from svn.freebsd.org ([127.0.1.70]) by svn.freebsd.org (8.14.5/8.14.5) with ESMTP id r1RLNw2G010232; Wed, 27 Feb 2013 21:23:58 GMT (envelope-from eadler@svn.freebsd.org) Received: (from eadler@localhost) by svn.freebsd.org (8.14.5/8.14.5/Submit) id r1RLNwuA010231; Wed, 27 Feb 2013 21:23:58 GMT (envelope-from eadler@svn.freebsd.org) Message-Id: <201302272123.r1RLNwuA010231@svn.freebsd.org> From: Eitan Adler Date: Wed, 27 Feb 2013 21:23:58 +0000 (UTC) To: doc-committers@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, svn-doc-head@freebsd.org Subject: svn commit: r41054 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/cutting-edge X-SVN-Group: doc-head MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit X-BeenThere: svn-doc-head@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.14 Precedence: list List-Id: SVN commit messages for the doc tree for head List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Wed, 27 Feb 2013 21:23:58 -0000 Author: eadler Date: Wed Feb 27 21:23:57 2013 New Revision: 41054 URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/41054 Log: Fix a bunch of grammos and typos PR: docs/176451 Submitted by: Tom Approved by: bcr (mentor) Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/cutting-edge/chapter.xml Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/cutting-edge/chapter.xml ============================================================================== --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/cutting-edge/chapter.xml Wed Feb 27 21:23:54 2013 (r41053) +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/cutting-edge/chapter.xml Wed Feb 27 21:23:57 2013 (r41054) @@ -1813,8 +1813,8 @@ Fetching 133 new ports or files... done. up-to-date, refer to for detailed help about synchronizing to a newer version. - Updating the system from source is a more subtle than - it might initially seem to be, and the &os; developers have + Updating the system from source is a more subtle process + than it might initially seem to be, and the &os; developers have found it necessary over the years to change the recommended approach fairly dramatically as new kinds of unavoidable dependencies come to light. The rest of this section @@ -1858,7 +1858,7 @@ Fetching 133 new ports or files... done. - Some configuration changes must be done before the new + Some configuration changes must be made before the new world is installed, but others might break the old world. Hence, two different configuration upgrade steps are generally needed. @@ -1946,7 +1946,7 @@ Fetching 133 new ports or files... done. mergemaster Repeated to update the remaining configuration files, - not that the new world is on disk. + now that the new world is on disk. @@ -2217,7 +2217,7 @@ Script done, … Do not save the output in /tmp as this directory may be cleared at next reboot. A better place to save the file is - /var/tmpor in + /var/tmp or in root's home directory. @@ -2234,8 +2234,7 @@ Script done, … To rebuild the world, use &man.make.1;. This command reads instructions from the Makefile, which describes how the programs that comprise &os; should - be rebuilt and the order in which they should be - built. + be built and the order in which they should be built. The general format of the command is as follows: @@ -2542,7 +2541,7 @@ Script done, … Manual Update - To instead perform the update manually, do not just copy + To perform the update manually instead, do not just copy over the files from /usr/src/etc to /etc and expect it to @@ -2580,7 +2579,7 @@ Script done, … Next, build a dummy set of directories to install the new /etc and other - files into. /var/tmp/root is a reasonable choice: @@ -2898,7 +2897,7 @@ Building everything.. Turn off profiling by setting NO_PROFILE=true in - /etc/make.conf). + /etc/make.conf.