From owner-freebsd-doc Sat Mar 11 20: 0: 9 2000 Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (freefall.FreeBSD.ORG [204.216.27.21]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id C9E6137BD8D for ; Sat, 11 Mar 2000 20:00:01 -0800 (PST) (envelope-from gnats@FreeBSD.org) Received: (from gnats@localhost) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.9.3/8.9.2) id UAA05205; Sat, 11 Mar 2000 20:00:01 -0800 (PST) (envelope-from gnats@FreeBSD.org) Received: from smtp1.interramp.com (smtp1.interramp.com [38.8.45.2]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id B3F2A37BC74 for ; Sat, 11 Mar 2000 19:51:55 -0800 (PST) (envelope-from horikawa@psinet.com) Received: from [38.26.194.88] (helo=localhost) by smtp1.interramp.com with esmtp (Exim 1.90 #1) for FreeBSD-gnats-submit@freebsd.org id 12TzQ0-00000h-00; Sat, 11 Mar 2000 22:51:53 -0500 Message-Id: <20000311225430B.horikawa@psinet.com> Date: Sat, 11 Mar 2000 22:54:30 -0500 From: Kazuo Horikawa Reply-To: horikawa@jp.FreeBSD.org To: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@freebsd.org X-Send-Pr-Version: 3.2 Subject: docs/17333: IPv6 man typos (rrenumd.conf.5, prefix.8, rrenumd.8) Sender: owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Precedence: bulk X-Loop: FreeBSD.org >Number: 17333 >Category: docs >Synopsis: IPv6 man typos (rrenumd.conf.5, prefix.8, rrenumd.8) >Confidential: no >Severity: non-critical >Priority: low >Responsible: freebsd-doc >State: open >Quarter: >Keywords: >Date-Required: >Class: doc-bug >Submitter-Id: current-users >Arrival-Date: Sat Mar 11 20:00:00 PST 2000 >Closed-Date: >Last-Modified: >Originator: Kazuo Horikawa >Release: FreeBSD 2.2.8-STABLE i386 >Organization: jpman project >Environment: 4.0-current src/usr.sbin/rrenumd/rrenumd.conf.5,v 1.3 2000/03/02 14:53:38 src/usr.sbin/prefix/prefix.8,v 1.1 1999/12/28 02:37:06 src/usr.sbin/rrenumd/rrenumd.8,v 1.1 2000/01/06 12:40:43 >Description: IPv6 related manpages, rrenumd.conf.5, prefix.8, and rrenumd.8, seems to have typos. rrenumd.conf.5 seems to have following typos: o "parentheses" should be "curly braces", because DESCRIPTION and EXAMPLES does not uses "(" and ")" but "{" and "}" for grouping. o "assinge" should be "assign". o "midium" should be "medium". o In SEE ALSO, "," is missing to separate references. prefix.8 seems to have following typo: o "midium" should be "medium". rrenumd.8 seems to have following typo: o In SEE ALSO, usage of "," is odd. And I made some punctuation related cleanup. >How-To-Repeat: $ man 5 rrenumd.conf $ man 8 prefix >Fix: --- rrenumd.conf.5.bak Sat Mar 11 20:40:24 2000 +++ rrenumd.conf.5 Sat Mar 11 22:37:02 2000 @@ -61,15 +61,15 @@ keywords and parameters. The vertical bar (`|') is used to indicate between a choice of optional parameters. -Parentheses (`(' and -`)') are used to group keywords and parameters when necessary. +Curly braces (`{' and +`}') are used to group keywords and parameters when necessary. .\" .Sh Interface specification There are some statements that may or have to specify interface. Interfaces are specified in the form of "name unit", such as .Ar lo0 and -.Ar ep1. +.Ar ep1 . .\" .Sh Configuration Statements .Bl -tag -width Ds @@ -164,7 +164,7 @@ .Cm add|change|setglobal command, as decimal bit number. .It Cm keeplen Ar keeplen-val -Specify the midium part of +Specify the medium part of .Ar use-prefix-val just next to the starting part specified by .Ar use-prefix-len @@ -250,7 +250,7 @@ (in this case, subnet number is 7th and 8th octet value of the prefix) .Pp -If you want to assigne prefixes beginning with fec0:1:1::/48 +If you want to assign prefixes beginning with fec0:1:1::/48 to each subnet, then following configuration will be enough, if each of your routers supports IPv6 multicast forwarding. The subnet number of the existing fec0:0:0::/48 prefix and the @@ -278,7 +278,7 @@ If you are going to do renumbering, then following procedure will be natural. .Bl -enum -offset indent .It -Assigne new prefix. +Assign new prefix. .It Set old prefix lifetimes to some appropriate transition period. @@ -334,7 +334,7 @@ command except that it deletes all pre-defined IPv6 global address. .Sh SEE ALSO -.Xr rrenumd 8 +.Xr rrenumd 8 , .Xr prefix 8 .Sh HISTORY The --- prefix.8.bak Sat Mar 11 22:35:50 2000 +++ prefix.8 Sat Mar 11 22:36:53 2000 @@ -102,7 +102,7 @@ Specify that .Ar len bits are reserved as identifier for IPv6 sub-networks in -.Ar prefix. +.Ar prefix . The .Ar len must be integer, and for syntactical reason it must be between 0 to 128. @@ -145,11 +145,11 @@ .Cm add|change|setglobal command, as decimal bit number. .It Cm up_keeplen Ar use_prefix_keeplen -Specify the midium part of +Specify the medium part of .Ar use_prefix just next to the starting part specified by -.Ar use_prefix_uselen -, as decimal bit number. +.Ar use_prefix_uselen , +as decimal bit number. Contiguous bits part in the same bit position of an existent prefix matched with .Ar match_prefix @@ -171,7 +171,7 @@ Valid value for .Ar time is same as for -.Cm pltime. +.Cm pltime . .It Cm raf_auto Enable the autonomous address auto configuration for the prefix to be added. --- rrenumd.8.bak Sat Mar 11 22:45:06 2000 +++ rrenumd.8 Sat Mar 11 22:45:34 2000 @@ -85,8 +85,8 @@ The program exits with 0 on success, and non-zero on failures. .El .Sh SEE ALSO -.Xr daemon 3 -.Xr rrenumd.conf 5 , +.Xr daemon 3 , +.Xr rrenumd.conf 5 .Sh HISTORY The .Nm >Release-Note: >Audit-Trail: >Unformatted: To Unsubscribe: send mail to majordomo@FreeBSD.org with "unsubscribe freebsd-doc" in the body of the message