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Date:      Fri, 19 Jun 2015 21:35:57 +0000 (UTC)
From:      Xin LI <delphij@FreeBSD.org>
To:        src-committers@freebsd.org, svn-src-all@freebsd.org, svn-src-head@freebsd.org
Subject:   svn commit: r284611 - head/share/man/man4
Message-ID:  <201506192135.t5JLZvs1072590@svn.freebsd.org>

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Author: delphij
Date: Fri Jun 19 21:35:56 2015
New Revision: 284611
URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/base/284611

Log:
  Fix markups and change e.g./eg. to e.g.,.
  
  MFC after:	2 weeks

Modified:
  head/share/man/man4/acpi_hp.4
  head/share/man/man4/acpi_ibm.4
  head/share/man/man4/acpi_panasonic.4

Modified: head/share/man/man4/acpi_hp.4
==============================================================================
--- head/share/man/man4/acpi_hp.4	Fri Jun 19 21:35:24 2015	(r284610)
+++ head/share/man/man4/acpi_hp.4	Fri Jun 19 21:35:56 2015	(r284611)
@@ -24,7 +24,7 @@
 .\"
 .\" $FreeBSD$
 .\"
-.Dd February 8, 2010
+.Dd June 19, 2015
 .Dt ACPI_HP 4
 .Os
 .Sh NAME
@@ -48,7 +48,7 @@ acpi_hp_load="YES"
 The
 .Nm
 driver provides support for ACPI-controlled features found on HP laptops
-that use a WMI enabled BIOS (e.g. HP Compaq 8510p and 6510p).
+that use a WMI enabled BIOS (e.g., HP Compaq 8510p and 6510p).
 .Pp
 The main purpose of this driver is to provide an interface,
 accessible via
@@ -58,7 +58,7 @@ accessible via
 through which applications can determine and change the status of
 various laptop components and BIOS settings.
 .Pp
-.Ss Xr devd 8 Ss Events
+.Ss Xr devd 8 Events
 Devd events received by
 .Xr devd 8
 provide the following information:
@@ -91,7 +91,7 @@ WWAN on air status changed to 0 (not on 
 .It Li 0xe1
 WWAN on air status changed to 1 (on air)
 .El
-.Ss Xr devfs 8 Ss Device
+.Ss Xr devfs 8 Device
 You can read /dev/hpcmi to see your current BIOS settings.
 The detail level can be adjusted by setting the sysctl
 .Va cmi_detail
@@ -197,8 +197,7 @@ Interface to read BIOS settings
 .Sh EXAMPLES
 The following can be added to
 .Xr devd.conf 5
-in order disable the LAN interface when WLAN on air and reenable if it's
-not:
+in order disable the LAN interface when WLAN on air and reenable if it is not:
 .Bd -literal -offset indent
 notify 0 {
 	match "system"          "ACPI";
@@ -281,7 +280,10 @@ This driver is experimental and has only
 HP Compaq 8510p which featured all supported wireless devices (WWAN/BT/WLAN).
 Expect undefined results when operating on different hardware.
 .Pp
-Loading the driver is slow. Reading from /dev/hpcmi is even slower.
+Loading the driver is slow.
+Reading from
+.Pa /dev/hpcmi
+is even slower.
 .Pp
 Additional features like HP specific sensor readings or writing BIOS
 settings are not supported.

Modified: head/share/man/man4/acpi_ibm.4
==============================================================================
--- head/share/man/man4/acpi_ibm.4	Fri Jun 19 21:35:24 2015	(r284610)
+++ head/share/man/man4/acpi_ibm.4	Fri Jun 19 21:35:56 2015	(r284611)
@@ -25,7 +25,7 @@
 .\"
 .\" $FreeBSD$
 .\"
-.Dd June 24, 2012
+.Dd June 19, 2015
 .Dt ACPI_IBM 4
 .Os
 .Sh NAME
@@ -74,7 +74,7 @@ sysctl, is set to
 .Va availmask
 by default, a value representing all possible keypress events on the specific
 ThinkPad model.
-.Ss Xr devd 8 Ss Events
+.Ss Xr devd 8 Events
 Hotkey events received by
 .Xr devd 8
 provide the following information:
@@ -144,7 +144,7 @@ Mute
 .It Li 0x18
 Access IBM Button
 .El
-.Ss Xr led 4 Ss Interface
+.Ss Xr led 4 Interface
 The
 .Nm
 driver provides a
@@ -344,7 +344,7 @@ when
 is set to 1.
 Events are specified as a whitespace-separated list of event code in
 hexadecimal or decimal form.
-Note that the event maybe handled twice (eg. Brightness up/down) if ACPI BIOS
+Note that the event maybe handled twice (e.g., Brightness up/down) if ACPI BIOS
 already handled the event.
 .El
 .Pp

Modified: head/share/man/man4/acpi_panasonic.4
==============================================================================
--- head/share/man/man4/acpi_panasonic.4	Fri Jun 19 21:35:24 2015	(r284610)
+++ head/share/man/man4/acpi_panasonic.4	Fri Jun 19 21:35:56 2015	(r284611)
@@ -25,7 +25,7 @@
 .\"
 .\" $FreeBSD$
 .\"
-.Dd February 25, 2012
+.Dd June 19, 2015
 .Dt ACPI_PANASONIC 4
 .Os
 .Sh NAME
@@ -100,7 +100,7 @@ For the other events such as
 mixer control and showing battery status,
 .Xr devd 8
 should take the role as described below.
-.Ss Xr devd 8 Ss Events
+.Ss Xr devd 8 Events
 When notified to
 .Xr devd 8 ,
 the hotkey event provides the following information:



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