Date: Mon, 17 Nov 2003 17:06:09 -0500 From: Joe Marcus Clarke <marcus@FreeBSD.org> To: "Simon L. Nielsen" <simon@FreeBSD.org> Cc: doc@FreeBSD.org Subject: Re: DocBook help Message-ID: <1069106769.737.78.camel@gyros> In-Reply-To: <20031117215514.GB405@arthur.nitro.dk> References: <1068365672.64416.2.camel@shumai.marcuscom.com> <20031109031918.40437858.trhodes@FreeBSD.org> <1068366438.64416.8.camel@shumai.marcuscom.com> <20031116173729.GC5895@electra.cse.Buffalo.EDU> <1069007319.3752.11.camel@shumai.marcuscom.com> <20031117043515.GA16285@electra.cse.Buffalo.EDU> <1069104837.737.71.camel@gyros> <20031117215514.GB405@arthur.nitro.dk>
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--=-JyqjnPAivR0EDjmL+one Content-Type: text/plain Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable On Mon, 2003-11-17 at 16:55, Simon L. Nielsen wrote: > On 2003.11.17 16:33:57 -0500, Joe Marcus Clarke wrote: > > On Mon, 2003-11-17 at 16:32, Josef El-Rayes wrote: > > > Ken Smith <kensmith@cse.Buffalo.EDU> wrote: > > > > On Sun, Nov 16, 2003 at 01:28:39PM -0500, Joe Marcus Clarke wrote: > > > >=20 > > > > > Yeah, that's fine. Thanks! > > > >=20 > > > > How's this? It's viewable in a very stripped-down web version at: > > > >=20 > > > > http://www.cse.buffalo.edu/~kensmith/FreeBSD/cluster_article.html > > > >=20 > >=20 > > Fixed, thanks! >=20 > Now that we are at the little things... :-) >=20 > When you use the trademark entities in the body of the text, then the > coresponding attributions entities should be used in the header. Since y= ou > use sparc and i386 it should be like this: >=20 > <legalnotice id=3D"trademarks" role=3D"trademarks"> > &tm-attrib.freebsd; > &tm-attrib.intel; > &tm-attrib.sparc; > &tm-attrib.general; > </legalnotice> Added. >=20 > I also noticed that there are some end-of-line whitespace in the SGML > file which should be removed, and some spaces in the beginnig of lines, > which should be tabs (see [1]). I didn't see any trailing whitespace or any lines that began with eight spaces that didn't already have a tab. To which lines do you refer?=20 Thanks! Joe >=20 > [1] http://www.freebsd.org/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/writing-s= tyle.html#WRITING-STYLE-GUIDE --=20 Joe Marcus Clarke FreeBSD GNOME Team :: marcus@FreeBSD.org gnome@FreeBSD.org FreeNode / #freebsd-gnome http://www.FreeBSD.org/gnome --=-JyqjnPAivR0EDjmL+one Content-Type: application/pgp-signature; name=signature.asc Content-Description: This is a digitally signed message part -----BEGIN PGP SIGNATURE----- Version: GnuPG v1.2.3 (FreeBSD) iD8DBQA/uUZRb2iPiv4Uz4cRAgt+AKCdlUt+SCWd3Q3aQf5Y5G+rbnMjvwCgsNxR MWca5WAIPqXPHzhl5bKtw9U= =QNoW -----END PGP SIGNATURE----- --=-JyqjnPAivR0EDjmL+one--
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