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Subject: docs/38361: Minor corrections in section 2.9.16 of the Handbook
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>Number:         38361
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       Minor corrections in section 2.9.16 of the Handbook
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    freebsd-doc
>State:          open
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:
>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Mon May 20 15:00:05 PDT 2002
>Closed-Date:
>Last-Modified:
>Originator:     Marc Fonvieille
>Release:        FreeBSD 4.6-PRERELEASE i386
>Organization:
>Environment:
System: FreeBSD abigail.blackend.org 4.6-PRERELEASE FreeBSD 4.6-PRERELEASE #5: Sun May 12 00:30:43 CEST 2002 marc@abigail.blackend.org:/usr/src/sys/compile/ABIGAIL i386


	
>Description:
Minor corrections in section 2.9.16 of the Handbook. Read the patch
below for more details.
	
>How-To-Repeat:
	
>Fix:
Apply the patch to handbook/install/chapter.sgml
	

--- chapter.sgml.diff begins here ---
--- chapter.sgml.org	Mon May 20 22:13:05 2002
+++ chapter.sgml	Mon May 20 23:44:36 2002
@@ -4284,9 +4284,9 @@
 
                               Yes   [ No ]</screen>
 
-      <para>Selecting <guibutton>[ No ]</guibutton> with the arrow keys
-	and pressing <keycap>Enter</keycap> returns to the Main
-	Installation Menu</para>
+      <para>Select <guibutton>[ No ]</guibutton> with the arrow keys
+	and press <keycap>Enter</keycap> to return to the Main
+	Installation Menu.</para>
 
       <figure id="final-main">
 	<title>Exit Install</title>
@@ -4308,9 +4308,9 @@
 
                             [ Yes ]   No</screen>
 
-      <para>Select <guibutton>[ Yes ]</guibutton> and remove floppy if
-	booting from floppy. The CDROM drive is locked until the machine
-	starts to reboot. The CDROM drive is then unlocked and can
+      <para>Select <guibutton>[ Yes ]</guibutton> and remove the floppy if
+	booting from the floppy. The CDROM drive is locked until the machine
+	starts to reboot. The CDROM drive is then unlocked and the CDROM can
 	be removed from drive (quickly).</para>
 
       <para>The system will reboot so watch for any error messages that
--- chapter.sgml.diff ends here ---


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