From owner-svn-doc-all@FreeBSD.ORG Tue Jul 9 06:27:56 2013 Return-Path: Delivered-To: svn-doc-all@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:1900:2254:206a::19:1]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id C19DE949; Tue, 9 Jul 2013 06:27:56 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from wblock@FreeBSD.org) Received: from svn.freebsd.org (svn.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:1900:2254:2068::e6a:0]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id A4B221ABB; Tue, 9 Jul 2013 06:27:56 +0000 (UTC) Received: from svn.freebsd.org ([127.0.1.70]) by svn.freebsd.org (8.14.7/8.14.7) with ESMTP id r696Ru27076373; Tue, 9 Jul 2013 06:27:56 GMT (envelope-from wblock@svn.freebsd.org) Received: (from wblock@localhost) by svn.freebsd.org (8.14.7/8.14.5/Submit) id r696RuOg076372; Tue, 9 Jul 2013 06:27:56 GMT (envelope-from wblock@svn.freebsd.org) Message-Id: <201307090627.r696RuOg076372@svn.freebsd.org> From: Warren Block Date: Tue, 9 Jul 2013 06:27:56 +0000 (UTC) To: doc-committers@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, svn-doc-head@freebsd.org Subject: svn commit: r42201 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/docbook-markup X-SVN-Group: doc-head MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit X-BeenThere: svn-doc-all@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.14 Precedence: list List-Id: "SVN commit messages for the entire doc trees \(except for " user" , " projects" , and " translations" \)" List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Tue, 09 Jul 2013 06:27:56 -0000 Author: wblock Date: Tue Jul 9 06:27:56 2013 New Revision: 42201 URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/42201 Log: Remove a confusing paragraph whose net contribution is negative. Remove some   from "Ports Collection", it's unnecessary. Make one example section consistent with the actual code. Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/docbook-markup/chapter.xml Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/docbook-markup/chapter.xml ============================================================================== --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/docbook-markup/chapter.xml Tue Jul 9 06:18:31 2013 (r42200) +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/docbook-markup/chapter.xml Tue Jul 9 06:27:56 2013 (r42201) @@ -60,7 +60,7 @@ should be presented. The DocBook DTD is available from the - Ports Collection in the + Ports Collection in the textproc/docbook-xml-450 port. It is automatically installed as part of the textproc/docproj @@ -114,7 +114,7 @@ The &os; extensions are not (currently) in the - Ports Collection. They are stored in the &os; Subversion + Ports Collection. They are stored in the &os; Subversion tree, as head/share/xml/freebsd.dtd. @@ -1225,9 +1225,6 @@ This is the file called 'foo2' This makes the generated output, especially HTML, appear visually better. - This can be confusing, and sometimes the choice is not - always clear. Hopefully this example makes it clearer. - Applications, Commands, and Options @@ -1320,7 +1317,7 @@ This is the file called 'foo2' To include the name of a program from the &os; - Ports Collection in the document, use the + Ports Collection in the document, use the filename tag with the role attribute set to package. Since ports can be installed in @@ -2167,8 +2164,8 @@ IMAGES= chapter1/fig1.png link linkend="introduction"sample introductionlink.para paraMore specific information can be found in the - link linkend="introduction-moredetails"sample introduction with - more detailslink section.para + link linkend="introduction-moredetails"sample introduction with more + detailslink section.para This output will be generated (emphasized text is used to show the