From owner-freebsd-doc Thu Oct 5 14:05:59 1995 Return-Path: owner-doc Received: (from root@localhost) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.6.12/8.6.6) id OAA21834 for doc-outgoing; Thu, 5 Oct 1995 14:05:59 -0700 Received: from localhost.lightside.com (user34.lightside.com [198.81.209.34]) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.6.12/8.6.6) with ESMTP id OAA21829 for ; Thu, 5 Oct 1995 14:05:54 -0700 Received: (from jehamby@localhost) by localhost.lightside.com (8.6.12/8.6.9) id OAA00270; Thu, 5 Oct 1995 14:06:51 -0700 Date: Thu, 5 Oct 1995 14:06:27 -0700 (PDT) From: Jake Hamby X-Sender: jehamby@localhost To: Sean Kelly cc: jfieber@indiana.edu, doc@freebsd.org Subject: Re: Kernelconfig.sgml FINALLY FINISHED! In-Reply-To: <9510052018.AA23469@emu.fsl.noaa.gov> Message-ID: MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: TEXT/PLAIN; charset=US-ASCII Sender: owner-doc@freebsd.org Precedence: bulk On Thu, 5 Oct 1995, Sean Kelly wrote: > Great document! And 34K is nothing to laugh at. That's hefty for our > project. It's up there with the SCSI and porting documents. And a > bit away from that mutant section on printing ... :-) > > Anyway, here's some proofing comments ... feel free to ignore all of > these: > > [snip...] > > Best wishes! > > -- > Sean Kelly > NOAA Forecast Systems Laboratory, Boulder Colorado USA Thanks for the compliments! I'm going to look over your suggestions in a little bit, and I noticed a couple of other changes I wanted to make. Namely, John suggested that I mention the exact syntax of the line, i.e. "controller le0 blah blah blah" instead of just "The le0 Controller" which I had before. I think this makes it a bit easier to find the line that's being discussed, so I'm going to apply that syntax throughout the document (there are a few sections I accidentally missed). Finally, I'm going to add a quick paragraph on the MFS filesystem which can be useful as a RAM disk for /tmp for example. Again, thanks for the comments, and I'll post to the list in a few hours after I've updated these last corrections... ------------------------------------------------------------------------------ Jake Hamby | E-Mail: jehamby@lightside.com Student, Cal Poly University, Pomona | System Administrator, JPL ------------------------------------------------------------------------------