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Subject: Re: cvs commit: doc/FAQ admin.sgml applications.sgml hardware.sgml         install.sgml preface.sgml troubleshoot.sgml x.sgml
From: Masafumi NAKANE/=?iso-2022-jp?B?GyRCQ2Y6LDJtSjgbKEI=?= <max@wide.ad.jp>
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     > hoek        1998/06/26 18:13:50 PDT
     > Modified files:
     > FAQ                  admin.sgml applications.sgml 
     > hardware.sgml install.sgml preface.sgml 
     > troubleshoot.sgml x.sgml 
     > Log:
     > (applications.sgml, hardware.sgml, install.sgml, troubleshoot.sgml):
     > docs/7082  Fix grammar errors (Dag-Erling Coidan <dag-erli@ifi.uio.no>)
  
     > admin.sgml:         Add section on amd
     > applications.sgml:  Add section on installing FrontPage
     > hardware.sgml:      Add sections on CAM, P&P modems, serial consoles
     > install.sgml:       Add section on why not to remove sc0
     > preface.sgml:       Sync versions-graph with our current temporal co-ordinates
     > x.sgml:             Add sections on missing Imake.tmpl, reversing mouse buttons
     > docs/7083  (FAQ maintainer, dwhite)
  
     > admin.sgml:  Something about mounting root.  With -a.  Dooh!
     > docs/7084  (FAQ maintainer, dwhite)

Grammar/style changes should be committed separately from true
contents changes to make it easier for the various translation project
to reflect the changes to the translated versions.

Also, I personally don't like changes to several files committed at
once when all the changes are not related to one another.  While it is
true that several commits create more mail traffic, it makes the log
message look nicer when you do cvs log afterwards, i.e., you don't
have to read the log message about files which you aren't interested
in.  This is just my opinion and others may think differently, though.

     Cheers,
Max