From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Tue Aug 26 00:00:37 2003 Return-Path: Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@hub.freebsd.org Received: from mx1.FreeBSD.org (mx1.freebsd.org [216.136.204.125]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 79ECC16A4BF for ; Tue, 26 Aug 2003 00:00:37 -0700 (PDT) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (freefall.freebsd.org [216.136.204.21]) by mx1.FreeBSD.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 0601143FBF for ; Tue, 26 Aug 2003 00:00:36 -0700 (PDT) (envelope-from gnats@FreeBSD.org) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (gnats@localhost [127.0.0.1]) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.12.9/8.12.9) with ESMTP id h7Q70ZUp011694 for ; Tue, 26 Aug 2003 00:00:35 -0700 (PDT) (envelope-from gnats@freefall.freebsd.org) Received: (from gnats@localhost) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.12.9/8.12.9/Submit) id h7Q70ZxN011692; Tue, 26 Aug 2003 00:00:35 -0700 (PDT) Resent-Date: Tue, 26 Aug 2003 00:00:35 -0700 (PDT) Resent-Message-Id: <200308260700.h7Q70ZxN011692@freefall.freebsd.org> Resent-From: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org (GNATS Filer) Resent-To: freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org Resent-Reply-To: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org, Denis Peplin Received: from mx1.FreeBSD.org (mx1.freebsd.org [216.136.204.125]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 185B416A4C0 for ; Mon, 25 Aug 2003 23:55:03 -0700 (PDT) Received: from mail.sg.vsmi.ru (vsmi-gw.sprint-v.com.ru [81.22.1.67]) by mx1.FreeBSD.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 3B99243FF7 for ; Mon, 25 Aug 2003 23:55:00 -0700 (PDT) (envelope-from info@volginfo.ru) Received: by mail.sg.vsmi.ru (Postfix, from userid 426) id CF80F1CDDC; Tue, 26 Aug 2003 10:54:57 +0400 (MSD) Received: from exp.local (unknown [192.168.0.199]) by mail.sg.vsmi.ru (Postfix) with ESMTP id 12D881CDDA for ; Tue, 26 Aug 2003 10:54:57 +0400 (MSD) Message-Id: <200308261054.57546.info@volginfo.ru> Date: Tue, 26 Aug 2003 10:54:57 +0400 From: Denis Peplin To: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org Subject: docs/55987: [PATCH] correct a few in handbook X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.1 Precedence: list List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Tue, 26 Aug 2003 07:00:37 -0000 >Number: 55987 >Category: docs >Synopsis: [PATCH] correct a few in handbook >Confidential: no >Severity: non-critical >Priority: medium >Responsible: freebsd-doc >State: open >Quarter: >Keywords: >Date-Required: >Class: doc-bug >Submitter-Id: current-users >Arrival-Date: Tue Aug 26 00:00:35 PDT 2003 >Closed-Date: >Last-Modified: >Originator: User & >Release: FreeBSD 5.1-RELEASE-p2 i386 >Organization: >Environment: System: FreeBSD exp.local 5.1-RELEASE-p2 FreeBSD 5.1-RELEASE-p2 #0: Mon Aug 11 15:07:04 MSD 2003 root@exp.local:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/EXP i386 >Description: see fix below >How-To-Repeat: >Fix: Index: advanced-networking/chapter.sgml =================================================================== RCS file: /home/ncvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/advanced-networking/chapter.sgml,v retrieving revision 1.234 diff -u -r1.234 chapter.sgml --- advanced-networking/chapter.sgml 21 Jul 2003 13:35:50 -0000 1.234 +++ advanced-networking/chapter.sgml 25 Aug 2003 22:47:43 -0000 @@ -715,7 +715,7 @@ point or another client directly. Typically, wireless clients only have one network device, - the wireless networking card. + the wireless networking card. There are a few different ways to configure a wireless client. These are based on the different wireless modes, @@ -888,7 +888,7 @@ a wi0 interface. If you had a Cisco wireless device, it would come up as an0, and therefore you would use - &man.ancontrol.8;. + &man.ancontrol.8;. @@ -1107,7 +1107,7 @@ that there is no support for spanning tree link management. A bridge can add latency to your ping times, especially for - traffic from one segment to another. + traffic from one segment to another. @@ -2060,7 +2060,7 @@ /usr/share/examples/diskless/clone_root shell script. This script needs customization, at least to adjust the place where the filesystem will be created (the - DEST variable). + DEST variable). Refer to the comments at the top of the script for instructions. They explain how the base filesystem is built, @@ -6578,7 +6578,7 @@ Background on IPv6 Addresses There are different types of IPv6 addresses: Unicast, Anycast and - Multicast. + Multicast. Unicast addresses are the well known addresses. A packet sent to a unicast address arrives exactly at the interface belonging to Index: config/chapter.sgml =================================================================== RCS file: /home/ncvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/config/chapter.sgml,v retrieving revision 1.117 diff -u -r1.117 chapter.sgml --- config/chapter.sgml 31 Jul 2003 11:26:43 -0000 1.117 +++ config/chapter.sgml 25 Aug 2003 22:42:19 -0000 @@ -137,7 +137,7 @@ of the files required to support the system, the &man.ports.7; collection (recommended) and the source code (optional). Both of which are optional at install time. - At least 2 gigabytes would be recommended for this partition. + At least 2 gigabytes would be recommended for this partition. When selecting partition sizes, keep the space requirements in mind. Running out of space in @@ -548,6 +548,7 @@ option is available. This will invoke the selected editor with an empty file. When the file is saved, it will be automatically installed by the crontab command. + Index: desktop/chapter.sgml =================================================================== RCS file: /home/ncvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/desktop/chapter.sgml,v retrieving revision 1.26 diff -u -r1.26 chapter.sgml --- desktop/chapter.sgml 31 Jul 2003 05:54:50 -0000 1.26 +++ desktop/chapter.sgml 25 Aug 2003 22:40:17 -0000 @@ -265,7 +265,7 @@ not worked for me. Install the www/mozilla port, - if Mozilla is not already installed. + if Mozilla is not already installed. Now copy the flash plug-in files with: Index: linuxemu/chapter.sgml =================================================================== RCS file: /home/ncvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/linuxemu/chapter.sgml,v retrieving revision 1.89 diff -u -r1.89 chapter.sgml --- linuxemu/chapter.sgml 13 Jul 2003 19:45:58 -0000 1.89 +++ linuxemu/chapter.sgml 25 Aug 2003 21:03:54 -0000 @@ -1474,7 +1474,7 @@ It might also be a good idea to add linprocfs to /etc/fstab. See man linprocfs. Another parameter to set is kern.fallback_elf_brand=3 - which is done in file /etc/sysctl.conf. + which is done in file /etc/sysctl.conf. Index: mirrors/chapter.sgml =================================================================== RCS file: /home/ncvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mirrors/chapter.sgml,v retrieving revision 1.312 diff -u -r1.312 chapter.sgml --- mirrors/chapter.sgml 20 Jul 2003 19:51:02 -0000 1.312 +++ mirrors/chapter.sgml 25 Aug 2003 21:02:56 -0000 @@ -4698,7 +4698,7 @@ United States of America - rsync://ftp-master.FreeBSD.org/ + rsync://ftp-master.FreeBSD.org/ This server may only be used by FreeBSD primary mirror sites. Index: multimedia/chapter.sgml =================================================================== RCS file: /home/ncvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/multimedia/chapter.sgml,v retrieving revision 1.52 diff -u -r1.52 chapter.sgml --- multimedia/chapter.sgml 13 Jul 2003 20:36:52 -0000 1.52 +++ multimedia/chapter.sgml 25 Aug 2003 21:01:45 -0000 @@ -1175,7 +1175,7 @@ To play from file, such as testfile.avi through one of the various - video interfaces set the : + video interfaces set the : &prompt.user; mplayer -vo xv testfile.avi &prompt.user; mplayer -vo sdl testfile.avi Index: security/chapter.sgml =================================================================== RCS file: /home/ncvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/security/chapter.sgml,v retrieving revision 1.164 diff -u -r1.164 chapter.sgml --- security/chapter.sgml 30 Jul 2003 13:49:47 -0000 1.164 +++ security/chapter.sgml 25 Aug 2003 21:00:44 -0000 @@ -3178,7 +3178,7 @@ Once this packet arrives at W.X.Y.Z it will need to unencapsulated, and delivered to 192.168.2.1. + role="ipaddr">192.168.2.1. You can think of this as requiring a tunnel >Release-Note: >Audit-Trail: >Unformatted: