From owner-freebsd-www@FreeBSD.ORG Mon Nov 6 18:00:57 2006 Return-Path: X-Original-To: freebsd-www@hub.freebsd.org Delivered-To: freebsd-www@hub.freebsd.org Received: from mx1.FreeBSD.org (mx1.freebsd.org [216.136.204.125]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 125DC16A492 for ; Mon, 6 Nov 2006 18:00:57 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from gnats@FreeBSD.org) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (freefall.freebsd.org [216.136.204.21]) by mx1.FreeBSD.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id BB34143D5C for ; Mon, 6 Nov 2006 18:00:55 +0000 (GMT) (envelope-from gnats@FreeBSD.org) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (gnats@localhost [127.0.0.1]) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.13.4/8.13.4) with ESMTP id kA6I0tAQ059290 for ; Mon, 6 Nov 2006 18:00:55 GMT (envelope-from gnats@freefall.freebsd.org) Received: (from gnats@localhost) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.13.4/8.13.4/Submit) id kA6I0tnR059289; Mon, 6 Nov 2006 18:00:55 GMT (envelope-from gnats) Resent-Date: Mon, 6 Nov 2006 18:00:55 GMT Resent-Message-Id: <200611061800.kA6I0tnR059289@freefall.freebsd.org> Resent-From: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org (GNATS Filer) Resent-To: freebsd-www@FreeBSD.org Resent-Reply-To: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org, Gabor Kovesdan Received: from mx1.FreeBSD.org (mx1.freebsd.org [216.136.204.125]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 8377E16A4AB; Mon, 6 Nov 2006 17:58:31 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from tux@server.t-hosting.hu) Received: from server.t-hosting.hu (server.t-hosting.hu [217.20.133.7]) by mx1.FreeBSD.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 0C51943D49; Mon, 6 Nov 2006 17:58:30 +0000 (GMT) (envelope-from tux@server.t-hosting.hu) Received: from localhost (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by server.t-hosting.hu (Postfix) with ESMTP id 68C109A0F7F; Mon, 6 Nov 2006 18:58:19 +0100 (CET) Received: from server.t-hosting.hu ([127.0.0.1]) by localhost (server.t-hosting.hu [127.0.0.1]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with LMTP id 8p3OcOWwILoZ; Mon, 6 Nov 2006 18:58:19 +0100 (CET) Received: by server.t-hosting.hu (Postfix, from userid 1001) id 4064A9A0DCD; Mon, 6 Nov 2006 18:58:19 +0100 (CET) Message-Id: <20061106175819.4064A9A0DCD@server.t-hosting.hu> Date: Mon, 6 Nov 2006 18:58:19 +0100 (CET) From: Gabor Kovesdan To: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org X-Send-Pr-Version: 3.113 Cc: Gabor Kovesdam Subject: www/105216: [patch] www/en/about.sgml - improve grammar X-BeenThere: freebsd-www@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list Reply-To: Gabor Kovesdan List-Id: FreeBSD Project Webmasters List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Mon, 06 Nov 2006 18:00:57 -0000 >Number: 105216 >Category: www >Synopsis: [patch] www/en/about.sgml - improve grammar >Confidential: no >Severity: non-critical >Priority: low >Responsible: freebsd-www >State: open >Quarter: >Keywords: >Date-Required: >Class: doc-bug >Submitter-Id: current-users >Arrival-Date: Mon Nov 06 18:00:55 GMT 2006 >Closed-Date: >Last-Modified: >Originator: Gabor Kovesdan >Release: FreeBSD 6.1-RELEASE-p3 amd64 >Organization: n/a >Environment: >Description: - "is" sounds weird with "these", "are" is better in this case >How-To-Repeat: >Fix: --- about.sgml.diff begins here --- Index: www/en/about.sgml =================================================================== RCS file: /usr/cvs/www/en/about.sgml,v retrieving revision 1.10 diff -u -r1.10 about.sgml --- www/en/about.sgml 12 Oct 2006 09:21:19 -0000 1.10 +++ www/en/about.sgml 6 Nov 2006 17:22:32 -0000 @@ -54,7 +54,7 @@ including CD-ROM, DVD-ROM, floppy disk, magnetic tape, an MS-DOS® partition, or if you have a network connection, you can install it directly over - anonymous FTP or NFS. All you need is + anonymous FTP or NFS. All you need are these directions.

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