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From: Murray Stokely <murray@FreeBSD.org>
Date: Sun, 3 Aug 2003 15:28:52 -0700 (PDT)
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Subject: cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/multimedia
	chapter.sgml
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murray      2003/08/03 15:28:52 PDT

  FreeBSD doc repository

  Modified files:
    en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/multimedia chapter.sgml 
  Log:
  * Remove/reword first person sentences.
  * Acknowledge Windows Media Player and Apple QuickTime trademarks on
    first use.
  * Remove several ridiculous sentences ("Most of the above is true.")
  * Other grammar fixes.
  
  Sponsored by:   FreeBSD Mall, Inc.
  
  Revision  Changes    Path
  1.54      +37 -36    doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/multimedia/chapter.sgml