From owner-freebsd-alpha Mon May 7 13:50:27 2001 Delivered-To: freebsd-alpha@freebsd.org Received: from sj-msg-core-2.cisco.com (sj-msg-core-2.cisco.com [171.69.43.88]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id CE67F37B424; Mon, 7 May 2001 13:50:23 -0700 (PDT) (envelope-from bmah@cisco.com) Received: from bmah-freebsd-0.cisco.com (bmah-freebsd-0.cisco.com [171.70.84.42]) by sj-msg-core-2.cisco.com (8.11.3/8.9.1) with ESMTP id f47Kopa29062; Mon, 7 May 2001 13:50:51 -0700 (PDT) Received: (from bmah@localhost) by bmah-freebsd-0.cisco.com (8.11.3/8.11.1) id f47KoMq75699; Mon, 7 May 2001 13:50:22 -0700 (PDT) (envelope-from bmah) Message-Id: <200105072050.f47KoMq75699@bmah-freebsd-0.cisco.com> X-Mailer: exmh version 2.3.1 01/19/2001 with nmh-1.0.4 To: Wilko Bulte Cc: FreeBSD-alpha mailing list , bmah@freebsd.org, dd@freebsd.org Subject: Re: request for comments / proc-alpha.sgml in -current In-Reply-To: <20010506155336.A43034@freebie.demon.nl> References: <20010506155336.A43034@freebie.demon.nl> Comments: In-reply-to Wilko Bulte message dated "Sun, 06 May 2001 15:53:36 +0200." From: bmah@freebsd.org (Bruce A. Mah) Reply-To: bmah@freebsd.org X-Face: g~c`.{#4q0"(V*b#g[i~rXgm*w;:nMfz%_RZLma)UgGN&=j`5vXoU^@n5v4:OO)c["!w)nD/!!~e4Sj7LiT'6*wZ83454H""lb{CC%T37O!!'S$S&D}sem7I[A 2V%N&+ X-Image-Url: http://www.employees.org/~bmah/Images/bmah-cisco-small.gif X-Url: http://www.employees.org/~bmah/ Mime-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: multipart/signed; boundary="==_Exmh_-1227579965P"; micalg=pgp-sha1; protocol="application/pgp-signature" Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit Date: Mon, 07 May 2001 13:50:22 -0700 Sender: owner-freebsd-alpha@FreeBSD.ORG Precedence: bulk X-Loop: FreeBSD.org --==_Exmh_-1227579965P Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii If memory serves me right, Wilko Bulte wrote: > I appreciate comments that you might have, on bugs/typos/whatever, but also > on the actual sgml. I'm not an experienced sgml user by any measure so > I guess there is room for improvement. Hi Wilko-- First I want to say thanks for dealing with a very large SGML conversion! In addition to picking up from the (very early) point where I left off, you also fixed a number of problems with my mark-up. I'm not that much farther along the SGML road than you are, so I'll leave most of these issues to those who are more qualified than both of us. One thing I noticed before (still not sure how to deal with this) is that there's a lot of places where command lines (with prompts) are dealt with either in-line or as separate elements, but not consistently. As an example, compare the command-line in the "Birds" section versus the command-lines for the Mustang/Avanti. I'm not sure what way makes most sense to fix this, BTW. These are pretty minor things, I think, and I'm sure the rest of the release documentation has similar things that *I* did strangely. They can be fixed up over time. Thanks again.....nice work. Bruce. --==_Exmh_-1227579965P Content-Type: application/pgp-signature -----BEGIN PGP SIGNATURE----- Version: GnuPG v1.0.5 (FreeBSD) Comment: Exmh version 2.2 06/23/2000 iD8DBQE69wqN2MoxcVugUsMRAsTgAKDkKdWsGfbAewwjg9WreSXC6jfNJwCg0SOn gF5kXR7/4zswLODbmLa80Io= =MUJ2 -----END PGP SIGNATURE----- --==_Exmh_-1227579965P-- To Unsubscribe: send mail to majordomo@FreeBSD.org with "unsubscribe freebsd-alpha" in the body of the message