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From: Murray Stokely <murray@FreeBSD.org>
Date: Thu, 6 Sep 2001 23:43:50 -0700 (PDT)
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Subject: cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ppp-and-slip chapter.sgml
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murray      2001/09/06 23:43:50 PDT

  Modified files:
    en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ppp-and-slip chapter.sgml 
  Log:
  * Reword advice given in the first person.
  * Add missing words to form better sentences.
  * Suggest that users simply set the router and router_flags variables
    in /etc/rc.conf, rather than the previous instructions to hack
    /etc/netstart.
  
  Revision  Changes    Path
  1.58      +21 -19    doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ppp-and-slip/chapter.sgml


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