From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Thu Dec 2 18:10:16 2004 Return-Path: Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@hub.freebsd.org Received: from mx1.FreeBSD.org (mx1.freebsd.org [216.136.204.125]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id CEC7C16A4CE for ; Thu, 2 Dec 2004 18:10:16 +0000 (GMT) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (freefall.freebsd.org [216.136.204.21]) by mx1.FreeBSD.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id A69B943D5A for ; Thu, 2 Dec 2004 18:10:16 +0000 (GMT) (envelope-from gnats@FreeBSD.org) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (gnats@localhost [127.0.0.1]) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.13.1/8.13.1) with ESMTP id iB2IAGYs002211 for ; Thu, 2 Dec 2004 18:10:16 GMT (envelope-from gnats@freefall.freebsd.org) Received: (from gnats@localhost) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.13.1/8.13.1/Submit) id iB2IAGBO002203; Thu, 2 Dec 2004 18:10:16 GMT (envelope-from gnats) Resent-Date: Thu, 2 Dec 2004 18:10:16 GMT Resent-Message-Id: <200412021810.iB2IAGBO002203@freefall.freebsd.org> Resent-From: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org (GNATS Filer) Resent-To: freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org Resent-Reply-To: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org, Gavin Atkinson Received: from mx1.FreeBSD.org (mx1.freebsd.org [216.136.204.125]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 70E2416A52B for ; Thu, 2 Dec 2004 18:03:16 +0000 (GMT) Received: from mail-gw1.york.ac.uk (mail-gw1.york.ac.uk [144.32.128.246]) by mx1.FreeBSD.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 888A743D53 for ; Thu, 2 Dec 2004 18:03:15 +0000 (GMT) (envelope-from ga9@buffy.york.ac.uk) Received: from buffy.york.ac.uk (buffy.york.ac.uk [144.32.226.160]) by mail-gw1.york.ac.uk (8.12.10/8.12.10) with ESMTP id iB2I3DEj014815 for ; Thu, 2 Dec 2004 18:03:13 GMT Received: from buffy.york.ac.uk (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by buffy.york.ac.uk (8.13.1/8.13.1) with ESMTP id iB2I3ChA097779 for ; Thu, 2 Dec 2004 18:03:12 GMT (envelope-from ga9@buffy.york.ac.uk) Received: (from root@localhost) by buffy.york.ac.uk (8.13.1/8.13.1/Submit) id iB2I3CeY097778; Thu, 2 Dec 2004 18:03:12 GMT (envelope-from ga9) Message-Id: <200412021803.iB2I3CeY097778@buffy.york.ac.uk> Date: Thu, 2 Dec 2004 18:03:12 GMT From: Gavin Atkinson To: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org X-Send-Pr-Version: 3.113 Subject: docs/74624: Grammar changes to freebsd-users slide X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.1 Precedence: list Reply-To: Gavin Atkinson List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Thu, 02 Dec 2004 18:10:17 -0000 >Number: 74624 >Category: docs >Synopsis: Grammar changes to freebsd-users slide >Confidential: no >Severity: non-critical >Priority: low >Responsible: freebsd-doc >State: open >Quarter: >Keywords: >Date-Required: >Class: doc-bug >Submitter-Id: current-users >Arrival-Date: Thu Dec 02 18:10:16 GMT 2004 >Closed-Date: >Last-Modified: >Originator: Gavin Atkinson >Release: FreeBSD 5.3-RC2 i386 >Organization: >Environment: System: FreeBSD buffy.york.ac.uk 5.3-RC2 FreeBSD 5.3-RC2 #5: Mon Nov 1 20:13:24 GMT 2004 root@buffy.york.ac.uk:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/BUFFY i386 >Description: Update a couple of points on the freebsd-users slide for better grammar. >How-To-Repeat: N/A >Fix: Patch attached. (also at http://www.devrandom.co.uk/freebsd/slides-users.diff ) --- slides-users.diff begins here --- Index: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/slides/common/freebsd-users.xml =================================================================== RCS file: /usr/cvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/slides/common/freebsd-users.xml,v retrieving revision 1.3 diff -u -r1.3 freebsd-users.xml --- doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/slides/common/freebsd-users.xml 8 Sep 2004 09:37:18 -0000 1.3 +++ doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/slides/common/freebsd-users.xml 2 Dec 2004 17:52:30 -0000 @@ -23,7 +23,7 @@ In the last year alone, about one million new FreeBSD hosts were counted by Netcraft, an incredible growth rate - despite more media attention for Linux. + despite more media attention towards Linux. @@ -71,7 +71,7 @@ - BSD has existed since the last 1970's and was the testbed + BSD has existed since the late 1970's and was the testbed and reference implementation for TCP/IP. The Internet Software Consortium (ISC) uses FreeBSD @@ -108,4 +108,4 @@ - \ No newline at end of file + --- slides-users.diff ends here --- >Release-Note: >Audit-Trail: >Unformatted: