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Subject: Re: svn commit: r41054 -
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On Wed, 27 Feb 2013, Eitan Adler wrote:

> Author: eadler
> Date: Wed Feb 27 21:23:57 2013
> New Revision: 41054
> URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/41054
>
> Log:
>  Fix a bunch of grammos and typos
>
>  PR:		docs/176451
>  Submitted by:	Tom <trh411@gmail.com>
>  Approved by:	bcr (mentor)
>
> Modified:
>  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/cutting-edge/chapter.xml
>
> Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/cutting-edge/chapter.xml
> ==============================================================================
> --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/cutting-edge/chapter.xml	Wed Feb 27 21:23:54 2013	(r41053)
> +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/cutting-edge/chapter.xml	Wed Feb 27 21:23:57 2013	(r41054)
...
> @@ -2580,7 +2579,7 @@ Script done, &hellip;</screen>
>
> 	<para>Next, build a dummy set of directories to install the
> 	  new <filename class="directory">/etc</filename> and other
> -	  files into.  <filename
> +	  files into <filename
> 	    class="directory">/var/tmp/root</filename> is a reasonable
> 	  choice:</para>

That results in

   "Next, build a dummy set of directories to install the new /etc and
    other files into /var/tmp/root is a reasonable choice:"

I would suggest just modifying the first sentence:

   "Build a temporary set of directories into which the new
    <filename class="directory">/etc</filename> and other files can be
    installed."