Date: Wed, 27 Feb 2013 15:36:26 -0700 (MST) From: Warren Block <wblock@wonkity.com> To: Eitan Adler <eadler@FreeBSD.org> Cc: svn-doc-head@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, doc-committers@freebsd.org Subject: Re: svn commit: r41054 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/cutting-edge Message-ID: <alpine.BSF.2.00.1302271528400.57262@wonkity.com> In-Reply-To: <201302272123.r1RLNwuA010231@svn.freebsd.org> References: <201302272123.r1RLNwuA010231@svn.freebsd.org>
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On Wed, 27 Feb 2013, Eitan Adler wrote: > Author: eadler > Date: Wed Feb 27 21:23:57 2013 > New Revision: 41054 > URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/41054 > > Log: > Fix a bunch of grammos and typos > > PR: docs/176451 > Submitted by: Tom <trh411@gmail.com> > Approved by: bcr (mentor) > > Modified: > head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/cutting-edge/chapter.xml > > Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/cutting-edge/chapter.xml > ============================================================================== > --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/cutting-edge/chapter.xml Wed Feb 27 21:23:54 2013 (r41053) > +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/cutting-edge/chapter.xml Wed Feb 27 21:23:57 2013 (r41054) ... > @@ -2580,7 +2579,7 @@ Script done, …</screen> > > <para>Next, build a dummy set of directories to install the > new <filename class="directory">/etc</filename> and other > - files into. <filename > + files into <filename > class="directory">/var/tmp/root</filename> is a reasonable > choice:</para> That results in "Next, build a dummy set of directories to install the new /etc and other files into /var/tmp/root is a reasonable choice:" I would suggest just modifying the first sentence: "Build a temporary set of directories into which the new <filename class="directory">/etc</filename> and other files can be installed."
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