From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Fri Jul 15 14:41:19 2005 Return-Path: X-Original-To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.FreeBSD.org (mx1.freebsd.org [216.136.204.125]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 95D9D16A41C; Fri, 15 Jul 2005 14:41:19 +0000 (GMT) (envelope-from tilman@arved.at) Received: from 21322530218.direct.eti.at (21322530218.direct.eti.at [213.225.30.218]) by mx1.FreeBSD.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id EDE5B43D5F; Fri, 15 Jul 2005 14:41:16 +0000 (GMT) (envelope-from tilman@arved.at) Received: from jim.arved.de (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by 21322530218.direct.eti.at (8.13.3/8.13.1) with ESMTP id j6FEfFft078007; Fri, 15 Jul 2005 16:41:15 +0200 (CEST) (envelope-from tilman@arved.at) Received: (from arved@localhost) by jim.arved.de (8.13.3/8.13.1/Submit) id j6FEfFu1078006; Fri, 15 Jul 2005 16:41:15 +0200 (CEST) (envelope-from tilman@arved.at) X-Authentication-Warning: jim.arved.de: arved set sender to tilman@arved.at using -f Date: Fri, 15 Jul 2005 16:41:14 +0200 From: Tilman Linneweh To: Giorgos Keramidas Message-ID: <20050715144114.GH19236@arved.at> References: <20050714170633.GE19236@arved.at> <20050714185739.GA1191@beatrix.daedalusnetworks.priv> Mime-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: multipart/mixed; boundary="9zSXsLTf0vkW971A" Content-Disposition: inline In-Reply-To: <20050714185739.GA1191@beatrix.daedalusnetworks.priv> User-Agent: Mutt/1.4.2.1i Cc: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Subject: Re: Small diff to ipv6 chapter X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Fri, 15 Jul 2005 14:41:19 -0000 --9zSXsLTf0vkW971A Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii Content-Disposition: inline Hello Giorgos, Thanks for the review here is an updated patch, which should contain your suggestions plus some additions. * Giorgos Keramidas [2005-07-14 20:57]: > When it makes sense, I prefer seeing commits that change > elements like this: > > example.net > > to this: > > > > This saves us typing, it's more difficult to get wrong (less duplication > of text) and renders better in non-hypertext versions of the docs, where > the link URL is not ``lost''. [..] regards tilman --9zSXsLTf0vkW971A Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii Content-Disposition: attachment; filename=patch-ipv6 Index: chapter.sgml =================================================================== RCS file: /home/dcvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/advanced-networking/chapter.sgml,v retrieving revision 1.366 diff -u -u -r1.366 chapter.sgml --- chapter.sgml 14 Jul 2005 21:27:31 -0000 1.366 +++ chapter.sgml 15 Jul 2005 14:35:34 -0000 @@ -2308,8 +2308,8 @@ Etherboot - Etherboot's Web - site contains + Etherboot's Web site contains extensive documentation mainly intended for Linux systems, but nonetheless containing useful information. The @@ -3648,15 +3648,16 @@ - IPv6 overview at playground.sun.com + IPv6 overview at playground.sun.com - KAME.net + KAME.net - 6bone.net + 6bone.net @@ -3825,7 +3826,7 @@ - Tunnel via 6-to-4 (Tunnel via the 6-to-4 tunnel interface &man.stf.4; (RFC3068) @@ -3840,7 +3841,7 @@ First take a look at the 6bone site and find a 6bone connection nearest to you. Write to the responsible person and with a little bit of luck you will be given instructions on how to set up your connection. Usually this - involves setting up a GRE (gif) tunnel. + involves setting up an IP tunnel. Here is a typical example on setting up a &man.gif.4; tunnel: @@ -3877,8 +3878,8 @@ 6 3ffe:1800:0:3:290:27ff:fe14:cdee 394.712 ms 397.19 ms 394.102 ms This output will differ from machine to machine. By now you should be - able to reach the IPv6 site www.kame.net - and see the dancing tortoise — that is if you have a IPv6 enabled browser such as + able to reach the IPv6 site + and see the dancing tortoise — that is if you have an IPv6 enabled browser such as www/mozilla, Konqueror, which is part of x11/kdebase3, or www/epiphany. @@ -3888,8 +3889,8 @@ DNS in the IPv6 World - There used to be two types of DNS records for IPv6. The IETF - has declared A6 records obsolete. AAAA records are the standard + There used to be two types of DNS records for IPv6: A6 and AAAA. The + IETF has declared A6 records obsolete. AAAA records are the standard now. Using AAAA records is straightforward. Assign your hostname to the new @@ -3963,7 +3964,7 @@ - IPv6 Tunnel Settings + IPv6 Router Settings If the server is to route IPv6 between the rest of your network and the world, the following /etc/rc.conf @@ -3998,15 +3999,15 @@ :addrs#1:addr="2001:471:1f11:246::":prefixlen#64:tc=ether: Replace fxp0 with the interface you - are going to be using. - - Next, replace 2001:471:1f11:246:: - with the prefix of your allocation. - - If you are dedicated a /64 subnet + are going to be using. Next, replace + 2001:471:1f11:246:: with the prefix of your allocation. + If you are dedicated a /64 subnet you will not need to change anything else. Otherwise, you will need to change the prefixlen# to the correct value. + The manual page &man.rtadvd.conf.5; describes the syntax of this + configuration file. + --9zSXsLTf0vkW971A--