Date: Fri, 1 Jun 2012 22:50:13 -0400 From: Glen Barber <gjb@FreeBSD.org> To: Ulrich =?iso-8859-1?Q?Sp=F6rlein?= <uqs@freebsd.org> Cc: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Subject: Re: Please review WINE chapter addition and linuxemu rename Message-ID: <20120602025013.GD1377@glenbarber.us> In-Reply-To: <alpine.BSF.2.00.1206011950340.92108@wonkity.com> References: <20120601175450.GO10094@acme.spoerlein.net> <alpine.BSF.2.00.1206011950340.92108@wonkity.com>
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Hi, On Fri, Jun 01, 2012 at 08:05:09PM -0600, Warren Block wrote: > On Fri, 1 Jun 2012, Ulrich Spörlein wrote: > > > in the process of adding the WINE section from the wiki to the handbook > > (GCIN 2011 project, yeah I know, I was rather busy ...), I also took the > > liberty of renaming it from linuxemu to compat. Also in the hope that > > someday we might have a blurp on SVR4 compatibility, although I guess no > > one is really interested in that. > > > > Anyway, please review the proposed changes at > > https://github.com/uqs/freebsd-doc/commits/wine > > or clone that branch and have a closer look. > > Like Gabor suggested, a single diff makes it easier to see all that has > changed. > > > Rendering of that branch can be found here: > > https://www.spoerlein.net/handbook/compat.html > > Just looking at the WINE section: > > "check the Wine AppDB on their main website." > > "their main website" could be removed. > > Those <programlistings> should be <screen> sections: > > <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>chroot /compat/i386</userinput> > &prompt.root; /etc/rc.d/ldconfig start</screen> > > And so on. Note that the ending tag should go on the last line of > output. If it is on a line of its own, there's an extra blank line in > the rendered version. > To add to Warren's style comments, there should be an empty line between <title> and <para>. Similarly for <sect> tags. The closing </para> tags should not be on a separate line alone. It might be good to use " in place of literal double quotes surrounding Wine is not an Emulator. "make install clean" could be sgml-ified as: <command>make</command> <maketarget>install clean</maketarget> without quotes. Regards, Glen
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