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([2607:fb90:a44c:4040:e19f:ea86:6488:91a6]) by smtp.gmail.com with ESMTPSA id m20sm18580581pgd.67.2017.03.02.10.38.33 (version=TLS1_2 cipher=ECDHE-RSA-AES128-GCM-SHA256 bits=128/128); Thu, 02 Mar 2017 10:38:33 -0800 (PST) Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii Mime-Version: 1.0 (1.0) Subject: Re: svn commit: r314563 - head/usr.sbin/syslogd From: Ngie Cooper X-Mailer: iPhone Mail (14D27) In-Reply-To: <201703021807.v22I7Jeg016057@repo.freebsd.org> Date: Thu, 2 Mar 2017 10:38:32 -0800 Cc: src-committers@freebsd.org, svn-src-all@freebsd.org, svn-src-head@freebsd.org Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable Message-Id: <3E8487D0-9BF5-47D4-9E77-A2F62224223E@gmail.com> References: <201703021807.v22I7Jeg016057@repo.freebsd.org> To: Ngie Cooper X-BeenThere: svn-src-head@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.23 Precedence: list List-Id: SVN commit messages for the src tree for head/-current List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Thu, 02 Mar 2017 18:38:35 -0000 > On Mar 2, 2017, at 10:07, Ngie Cooper wrote: >=20 > Author: ngie > Date: Thu Mar 2 18:07:19 2017 > New Revision: 314563 > URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/base/314563 >=20 > Log: > Wordsmith syslogd(8) >=20 > - Clarify -p/-S options by using appropriate subject-verb modifiers > (verb and modifiers suggested that the subject should have been > singular). > - Simplify/correct -a description: > -- Be more terse when describing IPv4 (the "usual dotted notation" > isn't necessarily well understood by the reader). Being blunt and > saying "IPv4 address" with an optional netmask is. > -- prefixlen is the appropriate terminology for IPv6. > -- mask/prefixlen is optional, not required (as noted later on in the > section). > -- split up IPv4/IPv6 use so to clarify both forms. > -- Fix wordiness when describing the optional "service" specifier. > - -T: Use "cannot" instead of "can't" [*]. >=20 > Bump .Dd for the changes. >=20 > MFC after: 1 month > Reported by: igor [*] > Reviewed by: hrs > Sponsored by: Dell EMC Isilon > Differential Revision: https://reviews.freebsd.org/D9855 >=20 > Modified: > head/usr.sbin/syslogd/syslogd.8 >=20 > Modified: head/usr.sbin/syslogd/syslogd.8 > =3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D= =3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D= =3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D= =3D > --- head/usr.sbin/syslogd/syslogd.8 Thu Mar 2 17:35:13 2017 (r31456= 2) > +++ head/usr.sbin/syslogd/syslogd.8 Thu Mar 2 18:07:19 2017 (r31456= 3) > @@ -28,7 +28,7 @@ > .\" @(#)syslogd.8 8.1 (Berkeley) 6/6/93 > .\" $FreeBSD$ > .\" > -.Dd December 21, 2016 > +.Dd March 2, 2017 > .Dt SYSLOGD 8 > .Os > .Sh NAME > @@ -102,21 +102,23 @@ options may be specified. > The > .Ar allowed_peer > option may be any of the following: > -.Bl -tag -width "ipaddr/masklen[:service]XX" > +.Bl -tag -width "ipaddr[/prefixlen][:service]XX" > .It Xo > .Sm off > .Ar ipaddr > -.No / Ar masklen > +.Op / Ar masklen > +.Op \&: Ar service > +.Pp > +.Ar ipaddr > +.Op / Ar prefixlen > .Op \&: Ar service > .Sm on > .Xc > Accept datagrams from > +.Ar ipaddr , > .Ar ipaddr > -(in the usual dotted quad notation) with > -.Ar masklen > -bits being taken into account when doing the address comparison. > -.Ar ipaddr > -can be also IPv6 address by enclosing the address with > +can be specified as an IPv4 address or as an IPv6 > +address enclosed with > .Ql \&[ > and > .Ql \&] . > @@ -129,7 +131,7 @@ A > .Ar service > of > .Ql \&* > -allows packets being sent from any UDP port. > +allows packets to be sent from any UDP port. Rereading my change, I think this part might be incorrect. I will go back an= d review the source code and correct if necessary. Thanks, -Ngie=