From owner-svn-doc-all@FreeBSD.ORG Thu Feb 28 02:18:09 2013 Return-Path: Delivered-To: svn-doc-all@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:1900:2254:206a::19:1]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 2C11F74D for ; Thu, 28 Feb 2013 02:18:09 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from lists@eitanadler.com) Received: from mail-wg0-f52.google.com (mail-wg0-f52.google.com [74.125.82.52]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id B273521B for ; Thu, 28 Feb 2013 02:18:08 +0000 (UTC) Received: by mail-wg0-f52.google.com with SMTP id 12so1044665wgh.19 for ; Wed, 27 Feb 2013 18:18:02 -0800 (PST) DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=eitanadler.com; s=0xdeadbeef; h=x-received:mime-version:sender:in-reply-to:references:from:date :x-google-sender-auth:message-id:subject:to:cc:content-type; bh=SxRM9JXpSOZNvIGH/eMqUAdb0nrtBp+S3XOi/mZq5hg=; b=OVsilJUwKE7OgDSk2uCF8qoEvVZyT3tbXxQ8xuQUqL0KDtwzcdNrJRAFU7U2AzLXEC 5Op03jrKH4HdHk2FIhinF2JYOOV3aBn+lSTWMdwpcHRTyLCr+JvbcEbdjMnhfc4PrRkB sAn1h5dAAUxZ6k1iuJT6f0Bzf402rbcaZuaHg= X-Google-DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=google.com; s=20120113; h=x-received:mime-version:sender:in-reply-to:references:from:date :x-google-sender-auth:message-id:subject:to:cc:content-type :x-gm-message-state; bh=SxRM9JXpSOZNvIGH/eMqUAdb0nrtBp+S3XOi/mZq5hg=; b=X+HHBPDjLRdyZSVhHjOcC7maKBLJ671G85Jyc37qDfe1VoKxOHVTniQT+CjsXZFHk1 0sdz59nccPImiQutW83qF8kYzCCMFPJtD3gfu5ewZZuN0fNqQBNA21copeA86qZywhH4 WDehQHGoddjhGp8JoXFJqFYAkZBn+pjtcvpU90XH3EYA3mLUa0xNK0qkkr1CoeUMhZG/ nbMF3AnPPC8rr5Tt6Z5MP9xPnPKSwdaQMBHqOS3lOXJHybxaJlTMpvl9DRNROY69/HS/ dSSJdYsmbbUNf4BHR3gjax1H4Of4/nATwRtAX5eO5892C8GLv0feJpq01MzsmVo92tgh TNsA== X-Received: by 10.194.133.198 with SMTP id pe6mr7395201wjb.9.1362017882321; Wed, 27 Feb 2013 18:18:02 -0800 (PST) MIME-Version: 1.0 Sender: lists@eitanadler.com Received: by 10.194.122.201 with HTTP; Wed, 27 Feb 2013 18:17:32 -0800 (PST) In-Reply-To: References: <201302272123.r1RLNwuA010231@svn.freebsd.org> From: Eitan Adler Date: Wed, 27 Feb 2013 21:17:32 -0500 X-Google-Sender-Auth: icG_OEIVW52qz0ct2a1Hxf35_Bs Message-ID: Subject: Re: svn commit: r41054 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/cutting-edge To: Warren Block Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 X-Gm-Message-State: ALoCoQml0JGZ04YOihkfNKJ7WUd1CSHxDennGAO4vT0OA6kyukAagvDjc0yQv90VCx7GZCWf2yE7 Cc: svn-doc-head@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, doc-committers@freebsd.org X-BeenThere: svn-doc-all@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.14 Precedence: list List-Id: "SVN commit messages for the entire doc trees \(except for " user" , " projects" , and " translations" \)" List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Thu, 28 Feb 2013 02:18:09 -0000 On 27 February 2013 17:36, Warren Block wrote: > I would suggest just modifying the first sentence: > > "Build a temporary set of directories into which the new > /etc and other files can be > installed." I prefer a colon at the end, but patch sent to mentors. Thanks! -- Eitan Adler Source, Ports, Doc committer Bugmeister, Ports Security teams